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Reviews For Perfectus Memoria
Title: Epilogue 16 Jul 2011 2:44 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Title: Epilogue 21 Apr 2011 6:27 pm
Reviewer: dottylizard (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's such a sweet scene at the end of chapter 14! No complaints here about the epilogue either.
    I must admit though that I had thought of Voldemort picking up the poison some time back, but hadn't thought of Snape thinking to give the 'wrong' potion; maybe I was worried about the speed of the adverse affects? And whether Snape would be harmed for giving the wrong potion...

    It's a great relief in some ways to come across a story which manages so realistically to get Harry out of the tournament; I know there's a few out there, and many where characters say that there was no way he should have competed etc, but this kind of situation seems to be rare.
    Only loose end that I can think of at the moment is the matter of catching Peter, and fixing the issue of Sirius' imprisonment and the guardianship of Harry. Not that it's relavant to this story as such. Foolproof story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, very much! I do have a sequel in mind, so if I ever get to writing it, I'll be able to tie up those dangling ends that weren't immediately pertinent to this story.

    Thanks again for the wonderful review! ^^ ~D

Title: Epilogue 31 Mar 2011 10:25 am
Reviewer: multitaskmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved it. Thank you for writing and for sharing it. :)

    Author's Response: You're welcome. Thanks for the R&R.
Title: Epilogue 24 Jan 2011 4:46 am
Reviewer: Oakleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story with great plot and character. Well done on a great story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Title: Epilogue 28 Jul 2010 6:25 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it! I was afraid at first it would be Harry that would die when I saw the "Character Death" warning, but when Harry ended up in the graveyard I knew it would be Voldemort. Good idea and great story!

    Author's Response:

    I decided not to kill Harry, though, when I started writing it was very much a possibility.

    Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the R&R! ^^

    ~D

Title: Epilogue 27 Jul 2010 6:25 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cute ending! I think Harry made a wise decision, but it is also the fact that he has a loving father figure now that gave him the security and perception to make it. I do hope he can someday have some good memories of James and Lily, but even if he doesn't , he does have a real family of his own now.

    Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response:

    I had this scene in mind since I decided that I wasn't going to kill Harry, after all (and yes, I very nearly decided to do so). You're correct about the reason Harry decided against using Perfectus Memoria - he's in a much better emotional state, now, than when he'd first tried to make it.

    As for the future... the Muse has proposed a sequel, actually, but there shall be no promises. 

    Anyhow, thank you so much for all the delightful reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story, because I sure had a lot of fun writing it! ^^

    ~D

Title: Chapter 14 27 Jul 2010 6:22 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I guessed right! I hardly ever do that. What a neat way to handle the Voldemort dilemma.

    And of course Severus' anti-dote worked! I knew he could do it.

    And the ending line just made me go "awwww"! Lovely!
Title: Chapter 13 27 Jul 2010 6:19 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, what an exciting chapter! I can feel Harry's getting close to giving up in the beginning, but I hope he'll keep on having faith. I liked how the pendant meant so much to him, not only because of it's practical, life-saving quality, but because Severus had given it to him.

    And of course there was the confrontation with Voldie...Hey, did he take Harry's blood to resurrect himself, like in canon? If so, would he be poisoned now too? That would be very cool! And no anti-dote for him!
Title: Chapter 12 27 Jul 2010 6:14 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked how you brought Draco into the story and showed that the rivalry between the two isn't truly mean-spirited. I hope that Draco can be redeemed, or at least that his respect for Severus will keep him from joining Voldemort.

    Harry had another close call! Well, more than one actually. Poor kid, seems like things are getting worse for him. Time may be running out. I hope Severus can come up with that anti-dote soon.
Title: Chapter 11 26 Jul 2010 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Apparently Harry was very allergic to the Djinn berries, huh?

    Lovely at the beginning when Severus actually told Harry that he cared for him. Good for him!

    And good for Harry to tell Ron and Hermione. It was difficult, but they needed to know and Harry needed to tell them. Now at least it's not hanging over his head anymore.

    Now Severus just has to create that anti-dote!

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