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Title: Chapter 10 26 Jul 2010 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Ron's robes sounded very nice; Hana did a good job! And of course Harry was too handsome for words. I'm glad that they all had a good time at the Yule Ball, even if it did tire Harry out.

    And the ending, with Severus carrying him downstairs and putting Harry to bed, and then realizing that he does care for him...aw, that was beautiful.

    Author's Response: Hana is a small miracle worker. LOL ^^ Glad you liked it. This was one of my favorite chapters to write.
Title: Chapter 9 26 Jul 2010 9:14 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the beginning, with Severus letting Draco know he was wise to him, lol. Nothing gets by Sev in potions class...or at least not often.

    And I'm glad that Severus insisted that Harry go to the Yule Ball. He needs to keep busy and to try to have some fun. His state of mind is important too, and can have an effect on his physical well-being.

    I do hope Hana will be able to help Ron with the dress robe situation! Those ugly maroon ones truly were hideous!
Title: Chapter 8 26 Jul 2010 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, so Hermione knows now. I was expecting her to figure it out on her own. I'm glad she has the sense to keep quiet about it though. It is Harry's right to tell them when he's ready and I'm glad that she recognized that.

    I did have to grin at Ron's and Hermione's exchange about the Yule Ball. Typical of those two, and it provided a little lightness in an otherwise solemn chapter.

    Of course Harry is depressed. Who wouldn't be? But it's good that Severus was able to distract him a bit and keep him busy. Harry needs to try not to dwell on unpleasant things. The truth is that none of us knows how long we're going to be here, and we all need to take each day as a gift.

    Great chapter again!
Title: Chapter 7 25 Jul 2010 1:27 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter! Harry just couldn't escape some kind of escapade with a dragon, could he, lol? I can't say I blame him for having that panic attack. It would be pretty terrifying to have an angry dragon chasing after you.

    Thankfully they all are all right...at least I hope Harry's all right!

    Author's Response:

    I couldn't resist a confrontation with a dragon, really. It was a useful tool to help show how the poison was affecting Harry, despite his antagonist, and a way to imbue the tale with a small amount of action.

    Thanks for the R&R.

    ~D

Title: Chapter 6 24 Jul 2010 12:57 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good to see Severus and Harry beginning to care for one another.

    Tense ending though...those types of reactions can be so scary!
Title: Chapter 5 24 Jul 2010 12:50 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus is beginning to see that he's been wrong about the way Harry's relatives treat him. Hana is a very sweet and cute addition to the story, and it seems that things are going pretty well with Harry's moving in with Severus. Good descriptions of Severus' quarters, too.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. ^^ Hana was lots of fun to write. Also, I had Severus' quarters all mapped out, so it was easy to describe. Wish I'd come up for this floor plan for my other fic, though, as I really like it.

    Ta, again,

    ~D

Title: Chapter 4 24 Jul 2010 12:43 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    A powerful chapter! Harry's reaction is very typical, though it can be unpleasant for those around him. I'm glad that Madame Pomfrey spoke with Ron and Hermione and that they are determined to be there for Harry. He really does need them.
Title: Epilogue 23 Jul 2010 1:21 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sweet story. Thank you, Mila

    Author's Response:
    You're welcome. Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 3 23 Jul 2010 12:15 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, at least Harry's out of the Tournament and I hope that having Harry collapse on him shook Ron out of his state.

    But Harry definitely needs to start taking better care of himself. If he hadn't been in denial, he might have remembered that Severus said he would become weak and that's exactly what's happened without the daily dose of potion. I have a feeling that Severus is going to be keeping a closer eye on him from here on...and Hermione as well!
Title: Chapter 2 23 Jul 2010 12:10 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no, this does sound really bad for Harry. (Foolish boy, skipping that potion!) But I can understand that he's in denial now; it's a normal step and almost anyone would hate to accept such terrible news.

    And now the Tournament is still going on, too. Poor kid has enough to deal with already without that. I wonder how you're going to work it all out.

    It sounds like Severus has his work cut out for him. Thankfully, he's a potions genius, so hopefully he can come up with an anti-dote in time.

    And kudos on using the word, "widdershins", lol. It's not a word that you come across too often.

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