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Title: Chapter 11 10 Jul 2010 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry and his allergies! At least he's going to know all the rare ingredients to which he is allergic by the end of Snape's experiments. Great character interaction, I loved how you portrayed Hermione and Ron's reactions

    Author's Response:

    ^^ I always enjoy tormenting my characters at least a bit. Also, just having all the antidotes simply fail just seemed too easy, not to mention a bit dull.

    Thanks for the R&R - glad you're liking it.

    ~D

Title: Chapter 10 10 Jul 2010 12:44 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Really sweet ending to the chapter; I love how you're developing Harry and Severus' relationship. I also like how you portrayed Krum; it feels true to his canon personality, which is a nice change as many writers, somewhat unfairly, make him a villan.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I always thought of Krum as a pretty good guy, if a bit gruff. After all, the only time we saw him do anything villainous, he was under the Imperius curse.

     

Title: Chapter 9 10 Jul 2010 12:39 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, can't wait to see what robes Minerva saw fit to give Severus. I expect they're beautiful, though. Lovely character interaction.
Title: Chapter 8 10 Jul 2010 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry and Hermione, you portray grief really well. I wonder if Severus is going to press Harry into becoming his assistant so he can encourage Harry to fight for a cure.
Title: Chapter 7 10 Jul 2010 12:27 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting echoing of canon events. A very good chapter.
Title: Chapter 6 10 Jul 2010 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very emotional chapter. I like the way in which you are subtly developing the characters, makeing Severus and Harry more open to the idea of friendship
Title: Chapter 5 10 Jul 2010 12:14 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter; I think it won't be long before Severus prys the truth from Harry, another couple of nightmares, give or take.
Title: Chapter 4 10 Jul 2010 12:07 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet and sad; I feel truly sorry for each character for different reasons. Well written with little flashes of humour, despite the tragic theme.
Title: Chapter 3 10 Jul 2010 12:00 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting premise to get Harry out of the tournament (which, I guess, was, itself, a device to ush Ron into an arguement with Harry and, thus, reveal part of the truth to Harry's friends- very subtly done. A good chapter.
Title: Chapter 2 10 Jul 2010 11:51 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Good portrayal of the character's reactions to Harry's poisoning; Harry's stubborn denial, Severus' determination to fix things and Dumbledore and Pomfrey's deep, yet restrained sadness all feel very in character. It's an interesting twist that you've set this before the Triwizard tournament and looks to be a useful plot device.

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