Potions and Snitches
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Title: Double Potions from Hell 31 Jul 2010 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, that was hilarious.

    What on earth got into Snape today; calling Harry by his first name, and "actually" awarding him points!

    I can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora. :D
Title: Welcoming Feast Perspectives 31 Jul 2010 6:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Poor students and staff. Healthy does not have to mean disgusting. Did Umbridge pick the menu? She has to eat that stuff too. Does she like it? Sad first dinner... They can still have yams and broccoli and baked chicken for dinner... yum. Maybe tuna sandwiches for lunch with carrots and tomatoes, and porridge for breakfast. Can you tell that I'm hungry? ;)

    Well I hope that someone on staff figures it out soon. They can't just eat salad all the time, although if the salads were all interesting and made up of different things maybe they could.

    If they don't, then the children won't be able to focus and learn if they are hungry all the time. What a terrible proposition, but a very entertaining one. Ron would constantly complain, students would try to sneak out to Hogsmead and bring back candy. There could be a whole black market based out of the room of requirement. Maybe owls would be checked for sweets, and the children's luggage...

    I'm very interested in seeing where this is going, and what will happen. :) I like the set up a lot.

    I wish that we would have a lot more of Snape though, and a bit less of Sinistra. She's a bit of a firecracker and doesn't seem as if she came from canon. It's a little distracting, but I suppose that she's a part of your Harry Potter universe, and therefore exists just as strongly as any of the other characters, perhaps more strongly.

    It'll be interesting to see if the Headmaster can keep the peace, and what Umbridge will do. I can't wait to see. Will she still have all the evil decrees, and terrible detentions?

    Author's Response:

    Umbridge definitely picked the menu. And it's interesting that you say that she has to eat the stuff too because...well, you'll see. ;D

    That was just the starting dinner. Dumbledore probably is going to have a chat with the resident house elves about the menu and make some changes. :D

    Drats...you've figured it out. :D Okay, so I am going to have a black market of candy going on. And I do like your idea about the owls being checked. *hmm.... :D

    Snape is going to be a rather large part of it. I just haven't really got to him yet. I only included Sinistra in it to start us all off on a bang. :D There will be less of it in the future chapters, though, because she's just basically going to be a bit grouchy with the supreme high mistress known as Dolores J. Umbridge. :D

    Thanks for the review. :D Glad you like it so far.

Title: Changes 31 Jul 2010 6:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehehe. :) Love the start. Poor Dumbledore. Having Astronomy during the day is just cruel, although I suppose that this means that the students will have less of an excuse to stay up at night. Madame Pomfrey seems very stern. It is interesting to see her portrayed that way.

    Author's Response: I think by the end we will all be saying "Poor Dumbledore." :D I think Pomfrey's just a bit tired of the poor kids being loaded up on sweets all the time. Thanks for the review. :D
Title: Welcoming Feast Perspectives 31 Jul 2010 3:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! Sinastra is pissed! LOL!

    I'm looking forward to the next chappie and how everyone is going to cope with not having sweets--especially Dumbles and his lemon drops.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah...I know, but it's mostly due to Umbridge messing with her Astronomy and her coffee. And we will definitely see a Dumbledore scene without his lemon drops pretty soon. It'll scare all of us. ;D Thanks for the review. :D

Title: Welcoming Feast Perspectives 31 Jul 2010 12:20 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Surprising what a difference one change to the storyline can make!

    Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Title: Changes 31 Jul 2010 12:14 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    This promises to be fun.

    Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Title: Welcoming Feast Perspectives 30 Jul 2010 5:51 pm
Reviewer: Ray 22 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story!
    But how is this going to end up being a gardian Fic?
    When is Harry and Snape going to connect?
    Please continue!

    Author's Response:

    They're going to connect soon. Don't worry. After all, Harry has potions the next day. :D The guardian part of it is going to be a bit in the background mostly, but it becomes a result from something Umbridge does. :D Thanks for the review. :D

Title: Welcoming Feast Perspectives 30 Jul 2010 1:59 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amusing... I found it funny. Look forward to see where you are going with this story.
    Thanks.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. :D

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