Bravo!
This last chapter was kinda sad - poor Sev. Wonderfully done, though. Thanks for writing this! ^^
Author's Response: Sorry, it wasn't meant to be sad. It was meant to show that Harry and Severus had finally come to an understanding of each other, and had called a truce to the hostilities. Joshua brought them together kind of as a gift to Severus when he left again.
Oooh! Oh, I LOVE this chapter. ^^ Very nice - like how you've elected to utilize an OC (at least, I don't recognize the character's name). Love it. Poor Sev.
Continue! Continue!
I think I see what's going on... keep it up, this could be interesting!
| Title: A Strange Feeling
| 03 Aug 2010 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: johnny (Anonymous)
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Well, it will be odd to see how this turns out... will the slytherins act slytherin?
So funny! I have my suspicions as to what has happened to Harry, but I prefer to just let a story ride out and not to double guess too much. I look forward to Slytherin's reaction, should be a hoot.
Whoa! Nice little twist there. I was fully expecting his memories to be either James or Sirius not some Slytherin.
I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Very interesting story so far.
| Title: A Strange Feeling
| 31 Jul 2010 9:21 am
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| Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous)
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Oh, you clever, slightly sneaky author. For a moment there I thought Tom Riddle had taken over Harry but now... I suspect someone Blacker. ;)
An excellent chapter and very well written
| Title: The Pitch
| 31 Jul 2010 9:05 am
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| Reviewer: kazza (Anonymous)
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Oh, I love chapter one.
It's so lemon drop and fun too. ;)
I'm oddly amused with the lemon drops just dropped in the different sentences. It definitely makes it rather funny. Though, I am wondering about the haircut. Great story. :D
Oooohhhh myyyyy. hehehe!! This is awesome. I wonder what kind of greeting he will receive. Great start! Harry is so amusing. I wonder if he has Snape's old memories? At first I thought that he had Draco's, because that is what I was thinking of doing, and Slytherin fit. But if Harry has the memories of a much older student, then it makes sense that he might have Snape's... or riddle's. Oooohh. I can't wait to find out!
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