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Title: Chapter 6 13 Jan 2011 9:23 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, what a sweet lovely chapter! I just love how close Severus and Harry have grown. It's good to see Harry beginning to open up and confide in Severus, and to see Severus comfort and protect him.

    Great job!
Title: Epilogue 13 Jan 2011 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice, Dream and DA. Though, can you give me a short explanation why Severus' leg hurts so much? And why it is so dangerous for him to teach? I feel like I'm missing something there, which I guess I'm supposed to considering that this is called "Flashbacks." :D The ending is very warm and semi-fuzzy with Severus and Harry. Very good story.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, I alluded to that, some. His leg and nerves were damaged in an encounter with Bellatrix. His leg isn't hurting at the moment, Harry's just concerned that it is - and Severus, of course, wouldn't volunteer the information even if it were. The reason it is dangerous for him to brew is because the damage to his nerves causes random spasms and shaking in his hands. Could you imagine him pouring a volitile ingredient into a tetchy potion and suddenly dumping the whole thing in when his hand starts shaking? Tried to fill that in for everyone.

    Glad you enjoyed it. I really liked writing this last chapter.

Title: Epilogue 13 Jan 2011 4:43 pm
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    *Stands up and claps* This by far was my favorite chapter. It says so much about the two men. I'm glad Harry will be teaching along with Severus. I thinks its Harrys way of 5aking care of Sev and keeping an eye on him. This was a wonderful end for an even wonderful story.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Wid! Glad you enjoyed it. :D
Title: Epilogue 13 Jan 2011 4:27 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    i think for the two of them this works as a finishing chapter well done

    Author's Response: Thank you. ^^
Title: Epilogue 13 Jan 2011 8:48 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwwwwwww, what a great ending! I'm really sad there wasn't more to this though!

    Author's Response:

    Us, too, a bit. ^^ Maybe, someday, there will a sequel.

    Thanks for the R&R - glad you enjoyed it.

Title: Chapter 6 10 Jan 2011 11:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter of comfort and help thank you
Title: Chapter 6 09 Jan 2011 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Ray F.M. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwwwwwww.....
    Love it!
    Please continue!

    Author's Response: Will do. The next, and final, chapter will be along sometime this week. Thanks for the R&R!
Title: Chapter 6 09 Jan 2011 12:53 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    So sweet!!

    Author's Response: ^^
Title: Chapter 5 08 Jan 2011 5:06 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, what a change for Severus. He was so gentle with Harry. So glad that you're back DP.

    Great chappie too DOA, or DP OR both!?

    Love the story.

    Author's Response:

    Definitely both. Daught wrote the scene originally, but I recrafted it to fit this tale in particular. So, the bulk of the actual writing was already done. I just nipped, tucked and tweaked and VOILA! The chapter. ^^

     

    Thanks for the R&R, Pan. Glad you like it.

Title: Chapter 6 08 Jan 2011 1:53 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *sighs in contentment*

    Did I mention how much I love this story, Dream?

    You did a marvelous job tweaking this scene to fit the story. I love it! I'll be equally sad and happy when the last chapter is posted.

    Its been fun and I hope we write more together soon! Thanks!

    Author's Response: Definitely! We make a great team. Thank you for all your contribution! ^^

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