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Reviews For The Forgotten Child
Author's Response: Glad you think so. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks :P. Jack's family didn't put up as much resistance mostly because their mind was only occupied with Jack's brother Michael. They would have had some suspicion of Jack being different, but in the last number of years they weren't paying as much attention, but yes your comments are on the right track too. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you were surprised. Most of Jack's magic was disguised as Harry's. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thank for your review.
And I especially loved that last scene where Harry reverts to this past apellation for his father. It was really sweet to see such a bonding moment between father and son. Plus, the fact that he would have spilled all to Severud had he asked says a lot about how highly Harry thinks of him. Please update again soon, I'm really looking forward to reading more! Author's Response: I wasn't aware that the notifications weren't working, maybe I should get it checked out. Thanks for letting me know. Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I think that will keep happening from time to time. And yes, your comments are very accurate. I will be updating again in a day or so, I'm glad you're looking forward to more. Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: Thanks. And yes when they go shopping it will be quite interesting. I'm glad you think so, and thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. Thanks for the review.
I was hoping that Jack would be magical,but i didnt want to get my hopes up in case it wasnt so. I passed the hints of Jacks magic as Harry and called it a day..I'm super excited for the next chapter now :) Author's Response: Yeah, Jack's magic was often disguised as being Harry's. I'm glad you're excited for the next chapter, and thank you for the review.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was very sad for them :( Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: I assume you meant "Jack" instead of "Sam" ? And I haven't added anything in the story about it yet, but Frogabook doesn't really age for many reasons. Iw ill get around to explaining that eventually :P Jack has been a bit part of Harry's pre-Hogwarts life, yes. Even so, Jack doesn't receive any mail on his birthday, magical or otherwise. Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that. And I agree with your comments. I will be updating again in a few days. Thanks for your review. |
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