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Title: Changes 10 Sep 2012 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the room! Thank you for a great chapter

    Author's Response: Glad to hear it. Thanks for the review.
Title: August Fades, September Nears 10 Sep 2012 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Argh, Jack's parents make me really angry!! Lol, sorry had to get that out of my system.

    Anyways, this was a great chapter! I really enjoyed reading this! Especially Harry's jealously of Jack, which I can kind of relate to being the oldest of my siblings. Still, I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but do I detect a slight preference for Harry on Severus's part? Based on the fact that he wanted to tutor Harry rather than Jack…then again maybe it's just wishful thinking!

    Not that I want Jack to be neglected or anything of course but I can definitely see Harry's side of things. Please update again soon, I really really want to read more…especially what's to happen with this whole "sinister" feelings.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like Jack's parents either. No prob, I like reading any of your comments. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Severus is not necessarily prefering Harry over Jack, it's just that in his view he never forgets that Harry is his son and Jack is the friend of his son. He's just prioritising as Harry's father. Harry has become his sole focus since he adopted him. Yeah. Thanks so much for your review, I will be updating again in a few days.
Title: Harry's Speech 10 Sep 2012 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I had a huge lump in my throat when Harry gave his speech! it was very moving thank you

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I'm happy to hear that. Thanks for the review.
Title: Blank Spaces On His Family Tree 10 Sep 2012 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter but I'm confused about who Severus obliviated was it a muggle or Judith?

    Author's Response: Thanks. And Severus obliviated Judith.
Title: August Fades, September Nears 10 Sep 2012 9:34 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah I love Diagon Alley! it always sounds so cool, I understand Harry being a bit jealous of Jack getting any attention but I still kinda wanted to poke him in the eye in this chapter...lol probably because although he was cared for in the basics Jack has never had fabulous parents and must have felt awful when his parents just left like that without saying anything :)

    Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, Harry is over-reacting a little, and he tried to think of Jack's situation but...well, he is only 11. Thanks for the review!
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 10 Sep 2012 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    :-D I was getting my suspicions about Jack, but didn't want to say anything in my reviews in case I was wrong. I really like this chapter a lot--although I still want to strangle Jack's parents!

    I really liked how Severus explained about why Harry's hiding the letter had caused upset. And I liked it when he hugged Harry and forgave him.

    Of course Harry would be over the moon, hearing the good news that Jack would accompany him to Hogwarts! :-D The two of them are going to be quite a pair, and I'm sure they're going to cause a lot of mischief along the way!

    Well done!

    Author's Response: I'm not a big fan of Jack's parents either. And yes, the boys will be getting into quite a lot of mischief at Hogwarts. Thanks you very much for your review, I enjoyed reading your comments and hearing what you thought.
Title: Harry Does, but Lily Never Did 09 Sep 2012 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you I love. The frog!

    Author's Response: Thank you, and me too! Thanks for the review.
Title: Hogwarts Acceptance Letter 09 Sep 2012 8:10 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, although with only magical kids getting sick from that poison, the idea that Jack would be left behind was a bit incongruous, imho.

    Author's Response: Thanks. And actually, not only magical children could get sick from the poison. Any child, even if they're purely muggles, could have gotten sick if they were recently exposed to magic. Jack had been exposed to Harry's magic just before he'd had the poison, and being magical himself only made the sickness worse. Thanks for the review.
Title: Who are you, Cody? 08 Sep 2012 11:57 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: A Confusion of Names 08 Sep 2012 11:46 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i like jack. he's pretty cool!

    Author's Response: I'm glad, and yes he is. Thanks.

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