I’m back for another read of your magnificent short story. I love the calm angst with which it unfolds, and the realism of Harry’s questions and Snape’s actions. Thanks so much for this.
A very satisfying tale. You’ve done a great job with both Snape and Luna. This one is truly a 10.
Ooh! That was amazing. Luna was very realistic, not many people can write her like she really is. Are you going to add a sequel? That would be good, but you ended the story in a good note, so well.......
This popped up on the Story of the Moment to pique my interest and I'm glad it did. I rather loved your portrayal of Luna. She's always been a particular favorite of mine.
A great little story all around!
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| 22 Apr 2013 3:21 pm
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| Reviewer: HC (Anonymous)
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Completely believable. I love it!
I had to come back and read this story..I love Luna as a person..she was aware even though people thought she wasnt...anyway great story still
This is short and sweet. I loved it.
You know, I have never read a story where Snape has a conversion with Luna. You wrote it well:)
I do like how you keep everyone in character as much as possible. It makes everything that much more believeable:)
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