Oh my. that was a pretty horrible thing to do to Harry. No doubt Coral got hit, too. Or maybe not...
Anyhow, Great chapter :)
I really like the way you described the White Magic and the blood cells. It gave me a really nice mental image. Although, I'm really angry at someone (not sure who though) in the end of this chapter, somebody really should have told Harry that he might get hate mail. Dumbledore or somebody should've screened the mail. I really love the chapter though.
Awesome story! Great chapter. I love this new development. it is certainly new and fresh in the Harry Potter fandom world. Fantastic job!
I am really enjoying this story! I like the split from cannon, almost wish it was like this in the books.
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| 27 Jan 2011 9:36 am
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Absolutely awesome story! I just found it and read it all the way through! I love this whole parsel magic and healing aspect of the story. I am a bit a worried about the new twist though! I hope the few people who got ill in this chapter are not going to suffer anything.. After all, they all assisted in something very noble! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Ooooh! I knew it was too good to be true! There's ALWAYS side effects to "miracle cures".
I suspect that the overflow of the White Magic is not as benign as everyone assumes. I hope that Harry was not inadvertenly taking power from those he was around while he worked. I think he'd be devastated to find out that he'd caused problems for them (well, maybe not for that nasty guard who had hurt the first woman...).
I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to seeing what happens next!
Well Done!
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| 26 Jan 2011 7:08 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Odd....wonder what's going to happen. Kudos.
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| 26 Jan 2011 5:31 am
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Curious...and curiouser. I wonder what Harry's white magic is doing to the wizards he's curing. Nothing this good could come without some consequences. Wonderful setup - now let the games begin.
loved the update. this is such a great story. i hope Harry cures Lupin. wonderful if he will tackle the vampires next?
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