Well...you certainly know how to tug on the ol' heart strings.
I've read this before and I still love it! Absolutely wonderful and one of my favorites here on P and S! I'll definitely be back for another read! Great job!
Like it, no, LOVE it!! What a wonderful, cute, brilliant and simply amazing story!!! ^____^ What would I give for a second chapter to this!! Snape was simultaniously so snarky, incharacter and adorable that I feel like clapping my hands in delight. Pleeeeaaase, write many more stories, your Melfis.
| Title: Magic Actually
| 23 Jun 2011 6:06 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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cute story, and good characterizations. thanks!
Oh, I wouldn't mind seeing this story continue. It seems Harry and Severus are just starting to really get to know one another. Great story!
awwww very sweet i enjoyed reading it tho i wish there ws a follow up one shot lol bt i liked it a lot!!
| Title: Magic Actually
| 02 May 2011 9:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Kari (Anonymous)
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Oh, it was so touching! I'm glad that Severus finally was able to see Harry.
I hope to read more from you.
| Title: Magic Actually
| 25 Apr 2011 5:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Oh, that's so sweet! I just knew that Severus would give Harry pictures of Lily when he found out that the boy's relatives hate him. Although, wouldn't the writing on the back say "Lily Evans, October 1973". She hadn't married James by that point, let alone liked him. I like the way you characterized Millicent in the story. I loved that Harry wrote a thank you note to Severus.
Why aren't these beautiful stories in the featured section? I love this one so much!
Fantastic! 10! You are such a gifted writer and I really enjoyed this story! You kept them all very much in character and handed the story with tact! I wish this would turn into a novel, but it's also great as a oneshot! Great work!
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