| Title: Complications
| 02 Mar 2011 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You are not making it easy for poor harry are you? Good chapter thank you
Good chapter. That dream was weird and it made me laugh a bit. I loved Mrs. Weasley and that bag of hers. It reminded me of Mary Poppins
Ooh poor Harry seems to be looking at a rough time with the potion! lets hope Seveus can help with it :)
I have to admit that I've been one of those awful people who have read and enjoyed your story but had not yet left a review.
I'm really enjoying the character development you've managed to put into Harry and Severus without making it feel forced or completely out of character.
In addition, I've had quite a few laugh out loud moments including one you tried to slip in this chapter. Basil Fawlty? Way too funny! And of course Severus would recognize the reference. I would imagine that Cleese and his gang would be right up the Potion Master's alley, so to speak.
Thanks so very much for sharing your story with us. I will try to be better about reviewing.
| Title: St Mungo's
| 02 Mar 2011 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Really good chapter blending past books with your world thank you
| Title: St Mungo's
| 27 Feb 2011 6:01 am
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| Reviewer: Showers (Anonymous)
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Write! Keep writing! I want to see how your story continues to develop.
It was nice to see Mrs Weasley there for Harry as well this chapter :)
Oh no! Poor Harry.
That damned Voldie, Umbridge, Lockhart. It never ends for Harry.
I'm so glad that Snape is always faithfully by Harry's side though.
Great chappie.
VERY well done. One thing: (if it's a British spelling, then that's something else), but the word "prophecy" ends in'-cy', not '-sy', so it should be corrected. Otherwise, a perfect chapter. Thanks for all your work--it's appreciated.
I've been a bit lax in reviewing this, but I still eagerly pounce on each new chapter. Love the writing style, and I adore your Snape. He's so exactly right to be taking care of Harry, and I almost wish he were real - well, maybe without the passion for ballroom dancing!
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