I'm glad that Harry opened up to Snape and confided to him about his feelings and why he ran away. I'm also very glad that Snape told him that he is not responsible for winning the war, despite what Dumbles told him.
So looking forward to the next update. Great job capturing your character's feelings.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 3:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Marlie (Anonymous)
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I'm glad Snape is opening up a bit, great chapter
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 11:41 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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Please update. This story is awsome. Snape is in character and so is Harry and the place they are at with eachother, the building of trust and understanding is well paced, but like all epiphanies they come swiftly at times too. I think you are doing a swell job of writing and hope you will continue soon.
wow!!! very cool. What made Severus say that?! It's a very typical Harry situation, but Severus! I mean, yeah, it's pretty predictable, but still!!
Really enjoying this - and the speed of the updates! Keep it coming please!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 6:27 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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I love the ending to this chapter. The picture of Harry realizing that Snape somehow feels he has no choices, and yet telling Harry (who feels he can't escape his destiny) that he does have choices.
Great chapter! I loved that Harry sleepily/accidently called him "Dad," by mistake. Great job.
Great chapter! I loved that Harry sleepily/accidently called him "Dad," by mistake. Great job.
Wonderful!!! I absolutely loved it. A short chapter, but very much worth it. I love dthe healing scene, Harry's half asleep state, Snape letting him rest on him. The Dad and parental feelings. Even more I liked seeing more into Snape's character, and his past. nice idea with the gobstones and his mother, and having Lily be the one to try and show him things about himself. Great job with Snape's character. Well done!
Aw, that was really sweet. I loved how Harry leant into Snape's chest, and calling him Dad!! I love it. :)
Love this story.
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