OH wow, I hope he feels better! Take your time hon. I love this chapter. Great job!
Yay! I loved this chapter. Great job. they did a great job communicating. I wonder why Snape kept that picture. Maybe his mother did? thanks for the update!
Sorry to hear about your child! I hope that he will get well soon, and that you will emerge alright from the ordeal.
Awesome chapter! Yikes, Severus is really looking at his faults now. No choice. I hope that he can do an adequate job explaining himself! love it. Great job!
Hi, just wanted to say that I've been reading all along and really enjoying your story. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed; I kept meaning to.
Anyway, I love how you write Harry and Severus and the slow development of their relationships, with all the misunderstandings and mistrust. It seems very real.
I'm sorry about your son and hope he has a quick recovery! Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 17 Jan 2011 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Cant wait for the next one! Hope your little one is feeling better! Did he atleast get a cool cast all his friends can draw on?
Author's Response: His favorite color is yellow, which they didn't have, so he picked hot pink. I drew Flounder (from Nemo) and Patrick (from Sponebob) on one cast, and Tigger and Simba (from the Lion King) on the other :-).
| Title: Chapter 9
| 15 Jan 2011 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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AHHHHHH Somehow I missed this update till now!!!! It was soooo good! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UP DATE!!!!!
Author's Response: I hope to update soon, but after that it may be awhile. My young son broke his leg and had surgery on both legs yesterday, so my time is limited at the moment...
*screams* How could you end it there!
*cries*
Okay, better now. :D
Excellent chapter! I love how Snape forced himself to calm down before talking with Harry. And Harry's honest belief that Snape would want some sort of 'payment'. Poor Boy.
ANd Poor Snape.
Excellent chapter! I can't wait to read more!
O_O
Angery Snape! Yay!!
I kinda feel bad for Harry...not much, but a little bit. :D
I apologize for the sucky review...But I"m eager to read the next chapter...
| Title: Chapter 9
| 10 Jan 2011 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter You have observed their reactions really well.
Ooo! Nice 2 additional chapters. Finally, Severus is figuring things out. Of course, it's obvious to us. Just a bit of constructive criticism. If you write this from only Severus', then we, the readers, have to figure things out right along with him. It adds a great deal more suspense and interest.
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