this is wonderful i wish that this was a story instead of a one-shot
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry for the (years) late response.
I really like this; though Snape really needs to rescue Harry~!
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i gotta admit, even though Snape's OC he's still Snape. weird, i know. :) i like the whole Harry/Henry thing too, helps explain the differences in both of them. and it didn't even throw me off.
now i'm off to read the others and hope there's more coming!
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! Sorry for the late response.
It is always amazing how it is the little things that make the big chhanges. You really caught that well.
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nicely done,
Dumbledore has alot to answer for
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I absolutely loved this piece! I like how clearly yoyou portray the characters and Harry/Henry opening up to Snape about the Dursley abuse was very well written. My one suggestion to improve the piece would be to explain why Snape is referring to Harry as Henry a little earlier in the piece cos I was quite confused by that but great piece! Write on!
Author's Response: I'll think about editing it at a different time. So its up for consideration. Thanks again!
this is beautiful i loved it!!!!
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Great story! I really liked this aspect of Harry/Sev... I hope you write many oneshots;)
Author's Response: I'll try. Thanks for the review! ;<D
This was great! I love the shift between the old prejudiced Severus to the compassionate open-hearted one. I really hope you chose to continue, I'd love to read more!
Author's Response: Another one-shot in the series is up if you haven't read it yet. Thanks for your words of encouragement!
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