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Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 23 Apr 2016 7:44 am
Reviewer: retaco (Signed) [Report This]
    Is this abandoned??? I thought this site didn't have any stories that would not be finished, but nothing has been done here since 2011.
Title: Of Reiki and Kirei, Part One 15 Jun 2015 9:09 pm
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) [Report This]
    Being in Potter's predicament earlier in the sense of apologizing; I love how you described it. I felt the same way then... and it really connects. Not many people have the courage to keep it down on paper, like you have so carefully done. On another note; are you Japanese?
Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 12 Mar 2012 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    So I completely forgot how much I love this story!
    But really, it's amazing!
    :D
    It's not typical for Harry to be portrayed as mature and powerful, yet so human and vulnerable. I love how his and Severus's relationship was not overly fluffy, but that they understood one another and were a comfort. Great job on this fic! :D
Title: Professor Potter 24 Apr 2011 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This fic is amazing! Harry is so mature and I love his change! I ghope Snape can see that now!!
Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 07 Mar 2011 12:02 am
Reviewer: Candace (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really hope you update soon. This is a very complex story and I like it. Plus it is adorable to read about a jealous Snape....although I should use a better word sine a jealous Snape can be a very bad thing. LOL Good job on this story. You have put so much thought into this.

    Author's Response: :) I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing.
Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 06 Mar 2011 7:35 pm
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    I read this story yesterday...all of it! I love it! It is amazing, I love how you stay true to the characters yet develop them with so much depth. I love the slow progression between Harry and Snape! And I am on the same page as you with Voldemort, for someone who is supposed to have been brilliant and is one of the strongest mages it makes no sense his range of spells is minimal. At the same time that's what Rowling did to Harry gave him the disarming spell against the death spell...wth. But by giving Harry more depth and a bigger arsenal of spells you had to make Voldemort a meaner, tougher, guy. Good Job!!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Wow. Thanks :) I'm trying to make character changes plausible and that takes time. I'm glad you like it.

    It's crazy, ridiculous, but above all else, it's a pity, because that limited amount of spell range Voldemort possesses makes him incredibly predictable.

    And I'm personally wondering, judging what we've seen/read after OoTP (with the exception of the Voldemort/Dumbledore battle), just how exactly he found his followers... I'd think twice before following a guy who tortures whenever he wants to.

Title: Finding Common Ground, Part Two 04 Mar 2011 11:18 pm
Reviewer: WanderLust (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have enjoyed your work on this fiction immensely thus far. Your writing style is engaging and you have parsed the emotional tensions of these characters beautifully. Additionally, the specificity and build of your plot line is carefully determined and executed. I do have one small note on word usage; you frequently use the word 'deduct' when I believe you mean to use 'deduce' (i.e. you deduce meaning, you deduct points). Also, you have emphasized the considerable strain on your protagonist but we have yet to see any consequence. Am I right to think that this will be entering the story soon?
Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 03 Mar 2011 8:59 am
Reviewer: Angelfish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVE this! You are a wonderful storyteller! Thank you for sharing!

    Author's Response: :) Thank you very much for reviewing.
Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 28 Feb 2011 5:12 pm
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story-please make a new chapter soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I'm trying to :)

Title: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two 27 Feb 2011 2:06 am
Reviewer: Aeri21 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. Just a little bit sad right now...I hope things pick up for Harry soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks... I wish I could tell you that everything will be better from now on for Harry, but... I'm afraid I can't.

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