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Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 8:47 pm
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant last two chapters. I loved them and the use and description of Harrys Occlumency shields was ingenious. Well done, can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Perry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the interaction between Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks:-)  Snape and Harry interaction won't be happening until chapter six, next chapter, Snape will only be mentioned.

     

Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 1:43 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I've been awake all night with insomnia and started reading your story, hoping to put myself to sleep-- DIDN'T WORK! I'm WIDE awake after four chapters! Fascinating take on Harry's character, and especially how he learned to form his Occlumency shields. Also, I like the understanding he has attained for Snape. Can't wait to see where you ultimately take the story! :-) // Just a note: I've seen repeated use of "safe", meaning "except" (ex. "During torture sessions he had always felt the Death Eaters morbid pleasure safe for two people.")-- the correct word in this context is "save". I really admire you for being able to write such a terrific story in English! Way to go!

    Author's Response:

    Somehow I'm glad it didn't put you to sleep, but on the other hand I'm sorry my story couldn't help ;-)

    Thanks for the correction and for reviewing.

Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 12:29 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    "It wasn't dangerous, but looking into those emerald eyes was like looking into the eyes of a very old and wise man making her feel like a child. The only other person who had that effect on her was Albus." - hmm, then you are making Harry like some old and very experienced guy... Well, it may sound interesting, but remember that he's also a child and he isn't always so "old" :D

    Good luck :)

    Author's Response: Now that you're mentioning it... Not the best phrasing, I think... Thanks for pointing it out and thanks for the review :-)
Title: Respect, Dreams and Disdain 14 Jan 2011 12:29 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    "It wasn't dangerous, but looking into those emerald eyes was like looking into the eyes of a very old and wise man making her feel like a child. The only other person who had that effect on her was Albus." - hmm, then you are making Harry like some old and very experienced guy... Well, it may sound interesting, but remember that he's also a child and he isn't always so "old" :D

    Good luck :)
Title: Harry's Summer 13 Jan 2011 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter missed Severus!

    Author's Response:

    He won't appear personally for the next two chapters, but then he'll show up regularly. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Harry's Summer 13 Jan 2011 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Doewke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely love it!! Can't wait for another update. Poor Harry, carrying the weight of the world on his shoulders. How long will he cope. And how will Dumbledore and Snape respond!! Please update soon!! Keep up the good work!

    xxx

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :-)
Title: Another Year Begins 13 Jan 2011 12:05 am
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's a good student? Cannot be O_O. It certainly sounds interesting...
Title: Another Year Begins 12 Jan 2011 5:20 pm
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, can't wait for the next :)

    Author's Response: Thanks :-) It should be posted within the next 12 hours, I think.
Title: Another Year Begins 12 Jan 2011 3:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great writing thank you I like the continuing angst between them and the fact that Severus is teaching Potions for 6th Year

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And as for Potions... There will be quite a few Potions lessons, mainly because I love the "school scenes" in the book and love to write them myself.

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