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Reviews For A Life Unsettled
Title: Paternis Sentimentis 05 Feb 2011 3:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Great start JA.

    Poor Harry. I really hope that Snape comes around. Harry "does" deserve a family. Even if it "is" Snape! LOL!
Title: Draco 05 Feb 2011 3:24 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    AWWWWWWWWWWWW! *me hugs Draco and Harry* I love this chapter. im glad Draco is there for Harry, when everyone else abandoned him. and that last wish! *hugs Draco again* can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Old Wounds 05 Feb 2011 2:51 am
Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The relationship between Harry and Severus is developing but in hits and misses - as it should be. Harry doesn't know what it like to have a healthy relationship with a father-figure and Severus doesn't either. The blind leading the blind one might say. BTW, love the idea of Snape in an IKEA - fantastic.

    Author's Response:

    Lol, your comment just made me laugh about Snape being in an IKEA.  I hadn't thought about how odd that would be.

     

    Thanks for your review.

Title: Draco 05 Feb 2011 1:59 am
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. The bonding with Draco was awesome and the ending was really cute.
Title: Old Wounds 05 Feb 2011 12:39 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    just a queick question--what about Voldemort? Is he gone in this one?

    Author's Response: Yeah, it said that at the start of the story and in an authors note.
Title: Depressed 04 Feb 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this. Can't wait for an update.
Title: Common Place 04 Feb 2011 11:19 pm
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Snape sure is mistreating him.
Title: Depressed 04 Feb 2011 11:02 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    its really good
    cant wait to see some more interaction between harry and severus
    i love the realationship that you have going on with harry and draco too :D
Title: Immune 04 Feb 2011 9:00 pm
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait for more!!!
Title: Isolated 04 Feb 2011 3:46 pm
Reviewer: lex (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm not sure I get whey Ron is so mad at Harry, or why Lucius is being nice given his historical dislike of Harry.

    Maybe some background on Malfoy and his motives (good or bad) would clarify this? Alternate characterizations are enjoyable (I like Lucius as a secret good guy), but to pull them off effectively, it's helpful to give the reader a reason to move beyond the original characterizations as developed by JKR.

    Hope that makes sense - and it's just con crit. Nothing bad. :)

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