Ooh, interesting. I've rarely read a "good" Lucius. I loved his line about why he was taking Harry under his wing. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Well this is a neat start! I can't wait to see how Snape responds when he accepts the truth! Good writing too!
It's really good. Why don't you post next 3 chapters today :)
Man, I would be torn between hugging Harry and hexing Ron to miniscle tiny bits. Harry can't win, even in fan fiction. Come on snape, stop being such a stubborn old mule and embrace your son for who he is! Keep the updates coming!
Nice. I hope you put out another chapter soon!!!
Oh, man!!! Poor, poor Harry! I just want to hug him! Please update soon!
Ron is such an ass. I didn't see either of Ron's parents offering to let Harry accompany them.
Is Snape EVER going to come around?
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