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Reviews For Ugly Duckling
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 04 Dec 2012 4:29 pm
Reviewer: Melinda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was gorgeousness personified. Tragic, heart-breakingly beautiful and gorgeous. I applaud you.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 30 Dec 2011 2:38 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    That was the most beautiful story I have ever read. This is the second time I have read it, but it still makes me feel as emotional as I did reading it for the first time. I never imagined Snape's Animagus to be a swan, but after reading this I realise that it's perfect for him. Now I need to go and cry some more!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 08 Oct 2011 8:03 am
Reviewer: Lilbitxp (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for writing this! It was a very touching story, made me cry lol. I've never thought of Severus being anything but a predatory animal, so an elegant and beautiful swan was a great twist! Well done!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 03 Sep 2011 4:04 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVED it!!!!!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 01 Aug 2011 5:58 pm
Reviewer: haze (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That story is perhaps one of the most beautiful ones I've ever read. It was just...amazing...made me shed tears. Thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 29 Jul 2011 7:43 am
Reviewer: Kore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cried.

    Yep, that was definitely touching. The funeral caught me completely off guard.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 08 Jul 2011 2:56 am
Reviewer: CheyRainAwesomeness (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really good and I like it. It made me tear up actually.
    Peace!
    CheyRain
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 04 Jun 2011 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Silynara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    While I hate Fanfiction stories were 'Severus' dies in accordince with the book, I must say I like this story for 'Severus'' form. A Black Swan Severus Snape a beautiful picture.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 26 May 2011 11:38 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    You almost made me cry! (Again! Okay, you actually did. It seems you are able to do that everytime you have Sev dead and Harry learning more about him.) Although I saw it coming, I was so happy that Sev was the swan... and he tried to fight to keep Harry safe.

    Which is why I want to ask, do you think you will ever write a story where Harry dies and we get to see some interaction between the great black swan and 'his ugly duckling?' Because I would love to see (read) Sirus' reaction! Also I'd love to see how Harry reacts to the man knowing what he knows now and that Sev tried so many times to save him.

    If not, I'll live and dream what my own ending. (Like Harry punching Sirus in the nose when he calls him Snivillus!) Great job, love the story!!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 06 Apr 2011 8:08 am
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't cry. I really don't. I'm having an allergy problem that's why my nose is sniffly, my throat is clogged up and my eyes are all wet. Really.

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