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Reviews For Ugly Duckling
Very beautifully written and well done. Great job. :D Author's Response: Thanks. I know, I felt really mean denying Harry and Severus their 'happy ever after' but this felt rather more realistic and, of course, it also tied in with the canon, thereby avoiding loose ends. I'm glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you; I've seen plenty of stories where Harry makes friends with Snape in animagus form but never one where Harry doesn't discover that Snape is (insert animal's name) until it's too late. I thought that it might be interesting to examine this but, of course, that makes for a sad story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks: I'm glad you liked it ^^
Author's Response: Thank you: it always means a lot to writers when their reader's review ^^ Yes, Severus would have been devestated to leave Harry in his misery, let alone actively causing the child distress; I think their tragedy is a necessary foil for the fluffier aspects of the story and, of course, it leaves almost all the canon events unaltered. As for Albus, I think that the 'greater good', like his anti-slytherin bias, is a powerful force behind his decision-making; by remaining a DE, Severus would be in a position to save lives, protect students and, ultimately, bring down Voldemort and, if Severus and Harry's happiness had to be sacrificed, so be it. We see Dumbledore making similar decisions in the canon and I feel that it would be in character for him to clinically decide that dozens of lives were worth more than two people's happiness :( I'm really glad that you enjoyed this fic and thank you for your kind compliments; I really enjoyed writing this little story (even though the sad parts made me choke up too) and I'm honoured that you rate it so highly ^^
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I know, I've been really lax recently but I am working on both 'Inverted' and 'Pegasus' (plus a number of new stories) but it's taking it's time lol!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^: given Severus' status as an outcast, I rather wanted him to have a friend and Poseihudor seemed an appropriate choice of confident; it's not difficult to see how Severus would have met the Swan Lord or why they'd have become friends- the only explanation needed was why he's choose a foreign executor lol!) Glad you liked the memory; I was a bit worried about being too hard on Dumbledore but, then again, we've seen him make similar decisions.
Well done Morgana. Truly beautifully written. Swan song indeed. RIP Severus Snape. Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the kind compliments ^^ Yes, 'Swansong' was just begging to be used as a title for this piece; Severus had been, in effect, gagged but, once death allowed him to voice his feelings, his was the sweetest and most poignant 'song' of all (in my opinion ;)
It was excellent. Zabby Author's Response: Thanks: quite honestly, I thought about stopping on chapter 1 too but then I realised that would leave too many questions unanswered (like why Severus simply left Harry and why he pretended to hate him) so I wrote the second, more tragic part of the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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