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Title: Fear 31 Mar 2011 11:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good insight into how Harry is feeling thak you
Title: Fear 31 Mar 2011 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. I really like how you are letting this story unfold. Keep up the good work.
Title: Fear 31 Mar 2011 10:56 pm
Reviewer: ds862 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story! I want to give harry (and snape for that matter) a great big hug! Interesting how you had harry misconstrue snape's words. I hadn't picked up when reading snapes account that possible meaning. Thank you for updating so quickly and sharing!

    Author's Response: Severus has no idea his words could be miscontrued, either.
Title: Fear 31 Mar 2011 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww hugs to Harry he is so confused and scared which is making it even harder ot go through the motions

    keep up the great writing
Title: Fear 31 Mar 2011 12:10 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thankyou for updating this story so regualy! It makes my day when I see there is an update to this story!
Title: Fear 31 Mar 2011 5:18 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    poor Harry. You really can't blame him for thinking that way. Too bad Snape can't explain himself more. Still, I hope Snape doesn't let Dumbledore sway his course of action--the same for Sirius, I hope Snape keeps him at bay somewhat, too. I know Sirius loves Harry, but he's not good for him. Good chapter.
Title: Fear 30 Mar 2011 10:45 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I like this chapter a lot. Poor Harry, he's understandably withdrawing a lot.
Title: Fear 30 Mar 2011 9:50 pm
Reviewer: ariablu (Signed) [Report This]
    It's quite painful to see things from Harry's point of view, the poor lad.
    *cuddles him*
Title: Fear 30 Mar 2011 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Spring Fever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love this story. I think you have done a wonderfully realistic job depicting Harry's interpretation of the conversation he had with Snape. He has no reason to believe Snape has changed his perception of him in any way. Add in Severus’s brusque nature and Harry’s history with the Dursleys and of course the boy would naturally think the worst. I was concerned when you mentioned this story may lean towards suicidal themes – primarily because characters in these stories so often come across as very weak. I am finding however, by letting us into Harry’s delusional thought process, it is easy to understand and empathize with his feelings of entrapment.

    I have been curious throughout the story of Severus’s perception of Harry before the events of this school year. Was he simply projecting James onto the boy like in the books or just misinterpreting what he was seeing. Given Harry’s lack of a biological connection to and minimal nurturing by James, it seems odd that Snape would not have considered Harry more carefully. Was his dislike primarily based on physical appearance and what he thought he saw? I am interested in learning more about that.

    Anyway, I think you are doing a great job and I really appreciate your frequent updates. You're an excellent stroy teller.

    Author's Response:

    A lot of suicidality involves a delusional thought process.  It's important to me that characters are kept realistic. 

     

    Severus' feelings are complex and we'll see more about it soon.

     

     

Title: Fear 30 Mar 2011 9:17 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I think both Harry and Snape need to take courses on how to communicate clearly. Obviously, neither one is truly hearing what the other is saying.

    Author's Response: Oh, yes.  Unfortunately, Harry is thirteen and our Sev is under a lot of stress.  Hopefully things will be better once Albus gets back.

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