Very interesting (and angsty) to see how Harry interpreted Snape's words.
Good chapter. Love your story even though you killed off Neville.
Loved it even though it was short! You are a really good writer! I like feeling so connected to Harry.
Oooh this story is getting go~od!
Oooh this story is getting go~od!
Severus sounds out of his element. He should consult a counselor about Harry, or have Harry start seeing one. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, Sev's people skills need some work.
I, personally would lean toward the "more ominous" end of the spectrum myself-no sense of self preservation-remember?
Great chapter. thanks for the update.
V.
Author's Response: Yes.
I hope Severus will realize what's going on before long. Great chapter :)
| Title: Setting Boundaries
| 28 Mar 2011 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter loved the make with R & H. One point has harry seen snuffles at the bus stop whwn he ran away?
Author's Response: No, Harry never saw Snuffles in this version. Or if he did, so many other things happened that it just didn't stay in his head. You can assume Snuffles was there though.
Lol. Let me know if you need the original via e-mail. So it's like a squeel minus the l? Lol.
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