| Title: Home Again
| 15 Mar 2011 4:37 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I can't believe you killed off Neville! The uncle that beat Neville isn't Great Uncle Algie is it?
| Title: Home Visit
| 14 Mar 2011 11:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter they make a good team!
| Title: Secrets
| 14 Mar 2011 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good chapter and a rather an unusual reason for being a father thank you
wow, tense fic alright. I can sense the seriousness in it all (not ust by the topic of abuse and such, but because of the way it's written), and you've done an excellent job of portraying everyone ina very believeable manner.
You did not have Lupin and Severus using magic on the muggles as people tend to do (which is annoying because it's so unrealistic), so thanks.
You've done a really good job on everything and I look forward to reading every next chapter you update! Which I hope is soon because I really want to know how this if going to turn out! :)
Great job, keep it up!!
Author's Response: Severus is trying very hard to keep this quiet, so yes, any use of magic might be detected by the Ministry.
| Title: Home Visit
| 14 Mar 2011 12:20 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Good scene. I think it's more believable that Lupin and Snape would be fairly restrained with the Dursleys because they could not afford the Ministry getting involved. Lupin was great - very much like the cold, false-friendly way he talked in the Shrieking Shack at the end of POA. I hope you keep this story going.
| Title: Home Visit
| 14 Mar 2011 8:36 am
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| Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous)
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LOVE IT - I can't wait for more! Thanks for a great job addressing an important and sensitive topic! Keep it up!
| Title: Home Visit
| 14 Mar 2011 1:39 am
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| Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous)
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I am reading and enjoying, I just don't know what to say in a review for subject matter this serious. I'm glad they were able to get Harry out of the Dursley's custody and I hope he's not too upset when he finds out. Thanks for writing.
I think Severus needed Lily to haunt him this week for him to take the actions that he did. I hope Dumbledore thinks before he speaks when he is informed of what Severus and Remus just did or was Harry right and Dumbledore would be ok with it?
its really good
please update really soon
Lucy:D
| Title: Secrets
| 13 Mar 2011 9:08 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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very good sev. I love this I feel bad for harry
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