I liked this chapter. Keep up the good work!! Can't wait for your next update!!
wow, what a twist!
great chapter!
Wow, didn't the Severus/Harry revelation coming! I imagine that it will be equally hard for Harry to accept too, at least at first. Why do I have a feeling that Severus might have changed his mind about transferring guardianship by the time it becomes feasible...or so I hope.
Poor Harry; he's feeling so alone right now. Of course he would feel betrayed by Ron and Hermione at first, but I hope he'll soon see that they were being good friends and that they did the right thing.
I felt so badly for him when he just can't trust that anyone can help him get away from the Dursleys. Thank goodness that Severus is resolved on that matter. I don't think anyone could stand against him once he's made his mind up.
Looking forward to more!
| Title: Secrets
| 12 Mar 2011 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: wandlorean (Anonymous)
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Well, you had me up to the this point. Very well written and interesting, but the Snape-as-Harry's-father aspect isn't something I'm a fan of. You probably should've categorized this in 'Severitus' genre as well because this was totally unexpected. Despite the fact that I won't be reading it anymore, I just want to say you've done an excellent job so far. Good luck!
Oh Severus... there is no way that Harry won't find out, especially with a friend like Hermione.
| Title: Secrets
| 12 Mar 2011 6:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Tetra (Anonymous)
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...and the plot thickens.... Keep stirring!
Omg! I never suspected that Snape was Harry's father. Good job!! This was a total surprise; I like it!|
Wait till Harry finds out. Omg! Wait till Harry finds out. He won't be pleased. But at least he won't be with the Dursleys anymore.
Great chapter. You needn't have worried.
And the bomb strikes. BOOM! I didn't see that coming. Great job!! Please please please update soon! I want to see Harry's reaction, and that particular cliffie is kinda grating on my nerves!
| Title: Secrets
| 12 Mar 2011 11:16 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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James may have been Daddy but Snape was the sperm donor. Can't wait for the scene at #4.
Author's Response: And Wizards are o-so-interested in blood ties.
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