| Title: Exam
| 06 Mar 2011 11:43 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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lol Yes Sev send the werewolf! *S* is the full moon soon?....
Uh oh. The Dursleys are in for it now
Yes! Awesome story! I wonder how much of the exam Harry is going to remember, how he's going to feel about it. And I wonder what Snape has planned. I love you inclusion of Remus in the story. Great job, thanks for the updates!
| Title: The Seeker In Hiding
| 06 Mar 2011 9:18 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I love it! Awesome chapter. I wonder why Harry hasn't thought of making or nicking a healing potion though. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Mostly because he's thirteen and things are happening too fast. Perhaps if he'd dare ask Hermione...
AWESOME! I love this chapter, it's so great! One question-can Lupin visit the Dursley's during a Full Moon without having taken his wolfbane first? hehe! I think that Severus is right in not contacting the ministry...they would muck it up and worse comes to worse, try and take Harry.
Well, isn't he sneaky? Of course, you probably have to be to get into slytherin :)
Good chapter.
Brilliantly written and plotted chapter; I loved the chilling little details (like the door incident) and I love the interaction between Remus and Snape. Looking forward to the next chapter; I think Vernon, Petunia and Dudley are in for a nasty shock
| Title: Exam
| 06 Mar 2011 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: boay (Anonymous)
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As much as I like this story, I think Snape is wrong to handle Harry's case discreetly without informing the Ministry. (I'm not sure yet I understand his motivation to keep silent, especially since Neville and Harry weren't the first abused children Hogwarts has housed.) It's the type of maneuvering Dumbledore would try. With how ineffective the Ministry is shown to be, a collapse of confidence is what's needed in hopes they'll overhaul the system. Two children from well respected families were abused. If Harry was discovered, there would be more support to install long-lasting measures to insure children in the future were protected.
Yes, I understand Harry's delicate position in the war and the loose Death Eater's, but I imagine that they have enough influence to insure Harry be placed somewhere safe. I hope that reading future chapters will ease my discomfort for the direct of the story.
Author's Response: Sev has his reasons. ;-).
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