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Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 10:42 pm
Reviewer: xam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. Setting the tone just right. I can't wait for Harrys exam!
Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 10:16 pm
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad to see Snape taking Harry's possibly abuse seriously. I can only imagine what he would do once he finds out Harry was, indeed, abused.

    Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 9:57 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that's really good, I love your story so much! I'm glad that Severus is on the case now and hopefully will see clues no one else has seen. :-D
Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 9:17 pm
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder if he'll figure out that Harry is far smarter than he appears to be.

    Great chapter
Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 7:49 pm
Reviewer: johnny101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is getting so good. I wonder what the fall out and long term effects on the wizarding world are going to be in regard to politics.
Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 7:17 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh i love this! Can't wait to read more!
Title: A Subtle Pattern 01 Mar 2011 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I loved the careful, non-leading way Severus questioned Shacklebot.
Title: Aftermath 01 Mar 2011 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww Neville awwww

    as for the twins and Hermionie speaking up I am not surprised at all!!!

    hopefully the next chapter will be up soon
Title: Aftermath 01 Mar 2011 4:07 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Poor Neville! I really didn't expect that! I certainly hope that Uncle Algie gets the Dementor's Kiss for what he did! You did a good job in explaining Neville being an abused child by describing how his mannerisms and issues with memory and magic could be directly attributed to what Algie did to him.

    I find Harry's denial of the fact that he's been abused to be rather realistic, unfortunately. I'm looking forward to seeing just how his screening goes (because I can't see Snape allowing Harry to skiv off until Monday), and what the aftermath of all of this might be.

    Good job so far!
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 5:45 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well-written story. I'm looking forward to more chapters to see how this plays out. Too bad, though, that you had to choose Longbottom to kill. Would have been better to choose some minor character that we hardly knew. (I'm not finding fault, just expressing my preference as a Neville admirer.)

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