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Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 4:15 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wow, what a story, great start. not seen one of abuse written this way. looking forward to the other chapters.
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 1:11 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending, loved Severus' internal monologue and your portrayal of Hermione, Fred and George's revelation. Harry's thoughts on what constitutes abuse was also very well written.
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 12:51 am
Reviewer: lexie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is one of the best, most interesting stories i've ever read on p&s! I love it! Please update soon, I know it's probably irritating to be repeatedly asked to do that, but PLEASEEEE I CAN'T WAIT! this is just great. thank you!
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 12:25 am
Reviewer: Glo-Fish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story. Your characterizations all ring true. I never picked up on what an extreme thing it was for Neville's Uncle to drop him out the window (to scare some magic from him.) This is a unique, insightful look at Neville's character. I love it when stories make me see things differently and make me think. I can't wait to see where this will go with Harry. I love that the twins and Hermione are concerned and were able to see things were off with him. I also appreciate that Severus listened even if he didn't fully believe it. I am excited for more! Thank you for sharing!
Title: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011 11:00 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    ooooooooooo!!!!! I can't wait to see this through. Wonderful chapter!
Title: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011 10:30 pm
Reviewer: xVortex of MemoriesX (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good story so far. Update as soon as you possibly can and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011 9:03 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I'm glad that Harry's friends found enough courage to tell Lupin and Snape. It's the hardest thing-to tell someone about a friend's suspected abuse. I hope that Snape will be able make Harry go to his appointment...I have a feeling that Harry will give everyone a run for their money...great job and update soon!
Title: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011 8:44 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story you've got here ^^ I can't wait to find out what happens next! Neville's death really surprised me, since I've never read an abused Neville story before. Poor guy :'( But the writing is just terrific. I wonder how Harry is going to react to this whole thing. Please update soon :D :D
Title: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011 4:23 pm
Reviewer: xam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is really good so far! I can't wait for more!
    :D
Title: Aftermath 27 Feb 2011 3:44 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is well done, I hope they moved Harry's apointment up, and just cause the outside is healed wouldn't a magical exam still show the abuse?

    Author's Response:

    Harry really has no idea what these type of exams can detect.  

    I don't think Snape is going to move Harry's appt, he wants to let Hermione and the twins have some anonymity and that might tip Harry off that something was amiss. 


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