Wow! Awesome start, Paganaidd. I truly can't wait to the next update.
Damn! Why did it have to be Neville?
He was the last Longbottom.
Author's Response: Sadly, the Pureblood families are dying out for one reason or another.
I am so excited about this! You're off to a great start. I had tears in my eyes about Neville. Keep up the good work!
wow. that was really well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh wow, I'm really into this. This is so intense, and sad. I always felt like this was such a possibility too. Can't wait to see what's next.
Wow! What a fist chapter! Poor Neville. And poor Severus. To feel guilty over another death that wasn't his falt, is heart breaking.
Harry is gonna have a hell of a time trying to get out of this one!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
| Title: Home Again
| 25 Feb 2011 2:44 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Great start. Interesting explanation for Neville's difficulties
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| 25 Feb 2011 2:38 am
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| Reviewer: johnny101 (Anonymous)
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Please, please write more of this story!!!!!!!!
| Title: Home Again
| 25 Feb 2011 2:03 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I couldn't stop crying. The story really got to me. I found it well done even though it had me reaching for a tissue near the end.
Lovely start. I love your writing style. I can't wait to read more!
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