That could have gone either much worse or much better. Did Sev really have to add the bit at the end and did Harry not realize Sev was saying what he did because he believes that is what Harry wants?
| Title: Into the Light
| 12 Apr 2013 7:20 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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What an explosive and great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Difficult topic to write about, but very well done. Someone to love him, somewhere to belong.
Well, that could have gone better. I'm sure everything will turn out all right in the end though. Right?
That went well,lol
so glad you have updated I love this story.
This was a very emotionally charged chapter. I like how you had Harry react to the news, and how it further underlined what he fears to be true - that he is unwanted.
Wow. I just love the way you wrote this chapter. I can just imagine how Snape and Harry are feeling right now.
Sorry about your computer! I know how stressful that is. Hope more chapters come soon :).
Yep, as predicted, that didn't go well at all. If Sev had just STOPPED with his almost declaration of love it just might have worked. . . now someone is going to have to go after Harry--and it really should be Sev-if he's able. Ah, what a mess.
Wonderful addition to your story. Thanks for the update-you always make me smile when I see you've added to the story.
V.
| Title: Into the Light
| 12 Apr 2013 5:21 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Very angsty chapter! Poor Harry and poor Snape too.
Loved it though. Great story.
Oh no! You simply have to update again soon, please!!! I'm dying to read more!
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