| Title: Complicated
| 02 Dec 2012 2:05 am
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| Reviewer: mica (Anonymous)
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thank you for keeping up with this story, it lights up my day when I see there is a new chapter!
| Title: Glimmers of Truth
| 01 Dec 2012 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous)
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I think a 'be' should be between you'd and better.
"I think, in this particular instance, you'd better off if you did."
P.S. I greatly injoy the story. I love the characters. I also love how life isn't easy in your story.
| Title: Complicated
| 30 Nov 2012 1:26 am
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| Reviewer: Daisy (Anonymous)
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I love this story so much. The most believable Severitus I have read in a long while.
| Title: Complicated
| 29 Nov 2012 7:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Raych (Anonymous)
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I absolutely adore your story! I've been following it on ff.net but I've been trying to wait until its completed to read it. Finally took a dip in and couldn't stop reading! Read it all in maybe two days! Can't wait for the rest!
| Title: Complicated
| 28 Nov 2012 4:16 pm
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| Reviewer: MsTormented (Anonymous)
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I have to say I am really picky about reading fictions, I am impatient which means I always read completed ones. However, this is one I am willing to wait for. It is brilliant, the way you write Severus and Harry's relationship, you let it build you don't just automatically make them like each other and get along which is the best way in my opinion.
Nice chapter. I like Bill.
I'm melting over here, I may have to reread a chapter or so..got a bit lost lol
I haven't left a review in a long while - so sorry about that - please don't make me into potions? :)
Love where this story is going thus far, and looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you for posting a new chapter for Thanksgiving. :D It made my day!
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
Ack! What is this strange sight? *pokes the 'To be continued...'* But I'd just started reading! D:
I love how Harry has come to realize that Snape cares for him. His reluctance to worry the man in light of this is just sooo sweet. It gave me warm-fuzzies. *cuddles the warm-fuzzies*
Anyhow, I suppose I shall be waiting for updates like everyone else, now. Drats. I liked having more reading ahead of me! D: How did 51 chapters get so short?
*claps in delight*
I was wondering what was up with that woman. I was expecting something sinister, but I like what you've done far better. Bravo.
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