I’d have loved to see the Weasley boy’s reactions if Harry HAD hugged Snape, lol. Poor Harry just isn’t used to people caring about his safety.
Cant wait for more as always!
Aw, that was so sweet.
It's funny that Harry didn't question Snape calling him 'son'.
I love Harry's reaction to being called 'love'! lol
Good job as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Love this story. Interesting to see how the Weasleys who grew up with magic have trouble with the spell where Harry sees it as a healing spell.
Aww, this wasso sweet! I love reading it!
awesome chapter. I think Harry is starting to realize just how much he means to snape and vice versa
| Title: Complicated
| 23 Nov 2012 6:33 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous)
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Very nice chapter. Loved Harrys worry about Snape being upset and his realization that he didn't want to share Snape.
Im curious though -- what is Snape thinking?
| Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives
| 21 Nov 2012 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous)
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In the following sentence, did you want to put Mr. instead of Mrs. I didn't think Molly new about the CPR or Hermonie's quick thinking yet.
"Mrs. Granger," said Mrs. Weasley, "From what I understand, Your daughter helped save my daughter's life, tonight."
| Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives
| 21 Nov 2012 6:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous)
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In the following sentence I think every should be ever.
Anyway, they've been pretty out of it every since."
| Title: Tribuo Vita
| 16 Nov 2012 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous)
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Isn't Hermione effected by the calming potion at this point? Or does it need more time to start calming Hermione down?
If the potion needed more time to work, does the word 'still' need to be there? I seems like you added it because you know she will be calming down soon.
“Professor Snape?” asked Hermione slowly, “What did you just do?” her voice was still high pitched, and frightened.
| Title: Soul Bond
| 12 Nov 2012 5:02 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Loved it. When are you putting more chapters up?
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