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Title: Soul Bond 11 Nov 2012 9:50 pm
Reviewer: FortuneCookie (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love it and I hope you'll continue soon!!!
Title: Soul Bond 11 Nov 2012 5:32 am
Reviewer: Librasmile (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been reading for a while. Can't remember if I've reviewed. I have trouble adding reviews here for some reason.

    GREAT chapter, one of the best so far. I really loved how you handled it. And I thought Bill's involvement was great. The tone was excellent. You balanced the Weasleys' gratitude and apprehension quite nicely.

    Can't wait for your next installment.
Title: Aftermath 09 Nov 2012 1:26 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I believe the first word of the following sentence should be 'Nor' not 'Now'.

    Now did they have the deadpan expression of someone trying to hide their feelings. The three of them looked worried, sad and deadly earnest.
Title: Exam 09 Nov 2012 12:42 am
Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't think "the" should be in front of Potter. Potter is not a title. Of course Severus might think of Harry as "the Potter" but as written it seems odd.

    When the Potter hadn’t turned up at his appointment this morning, Severus had checked the pitch first.

    P.S I greatly enjoy the story.
Title: Revelations 08 Nov 2012 12:12 am
Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    In the following sentence Over is repeated twice.


    There was a lid over over Severus' plate of food. He assumed Lupin must have conjured it, because nothing like this existed in his kitchen. He slid it off, and eyed the exceptionally large portion.
Title: Soul Bond 04 Nov 2012 9:31 am
Reviewer: Lou (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chapter, once again. Its a brilliant premise for a story. Your writing is beautiful and authentic. Your characters are believable. You are an inspiration. What more can I say?
Title: Soul Bond 01 Nov 2012 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If Harry's been on the Weasley Clock since Ginny's suicide attempt. Why didn't they react to Harry's hand pointing to Mortal Peril during his suicide attempt? Shouldn't they be at least curious?

    Author's Response: Yes, they did. Yes, they are. We'll hear their take on that soon.
Title: Soul Bond 29 Oct 2012 10:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting chapters!
    Love the interplay with the. Weasleys and Severus
Title: Soul Bond 27 Oct 2012 5:11 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Yup, marry off two suicidal teens, it should be fun. Just joking. I like the story.

    Author's Response: So was Sev, so it's all good.
Title: Soul Bond 27 Oct 2012 4:48 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Well that was an incredibly awkward conversation, lol. I don’t blame the family for being concerned and all, but sheesh.

    I’m really curious about what Severus told Arthur to look up… and glad Harry wasn’t seriously hurt.

    Author's Response:

    Just buckets of awkward.

    Don't forget Sev's little speech to Remus.

    So's Sev. 

     


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