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Title: Under Layers 06 Jun 2012 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome chapter

    loved the gentleness from snape and as much as true the truth serum should not have been used it needed to be
Title: Under Layers 05 Jun 2012 4:25 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Snape almost slipped up there. Does Lupin know that Snape is Harry's real father?

    I love Snuffles and how he watches over Harry. It's too cute. I think that Snuffles/Sirius knows that Snape is taking good care of Harry. So Harry three protectors to watch over him. Very sweet.

    Love too how Snape is starting to really care and show affection to Harry.

    Great chappie. Can't wait fo rthe next one.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's one of the reasons Poppy suggested him. Of the people who know, Lupin was the only one available. The people in the know are Molly, Arthur, Poppy, Minerva, Lupin and Dumbledore. At least five more than Severus is comfortable with.

     Lupin is holding a lot of secrets and he's decided its time to get some of them out in the open. 

Title: Under Layers 05 Jun 2012 12:26 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally uncovered a few secrets from Harry huh...though a bit deviously but necessary. I especially enjoyed Severus's interactions with Harry, update again soon please!
Title: Under Layers 05 Jun 2012 12:16 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chapter! I was so happy to see an update. Poor Harry, the Dursleys ought to be thrown to the lions, though on second thought, they'd probably give the poor lions indigestion.

    I love how you're showing how Severus is becoming so protective and loving with Harry. It'll be interesting to see if Harry holds the veritiserum against him.

    Looking forward to more!
Title: Under Layers 05 Jun 2012 12:02 am
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    oooooh finally Sev and Remus are getting some answers, if if it was a little underhanded to use veriteserum - but sometimes it needs to be done that way - esp for stubborn Harry!!!! great job!! cant wait for more!!!
Title: Under Layers 04 Jun 2012 8:59 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love to see updates of this story :D
Title: Under Layers 04 Jun 2012 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Elena (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so nice! I love this Severus just too much. You' ve made him perfect: he isn't too caring but he is caring just like Rowling's Snape would be. I don't think i've been clear but i find in this fic the same real Snape that i first met in the HP books and i like it.
Title: Under Layers 04 Jun 2012 12:18 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    For me that was a 12 star chapter at least. You write Harry's detatchment so brilliantly I can actually feel it. Its so good that Snape did something practical to try and help. Lets hope it does. I suspect the Dursley's may be in more trouble too.
Title: Under Layers 04 Jun 2012 11:02 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love that Harry is starting to open up, even though he was influenced by a truth potion.
    I really like the dialogue between Remus and Severus too:)
Title: Under Layers 04 Jun 2012 9:31 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The Dursleys are SICK! I'm as outraged as Remus and Severus.

    I loved the tender moments in this chapter though, it's obvious Snape is getting attached to Harry :) But, Harry isn't going to be too happy once he wakes up from that potion.

    Cant wait to read more!

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