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Title: Revelations 11 Mar 2012 12:35 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderfully well done!!!
Title: Revelations 11 Mar 2012 12:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry told Severus about what happened no matter how he convinced him to do it. Harry needed to talk about it.

    Will Snape and Lupin be a couple? They seem good together.

    Poor Harry...hearing that he was unwanted. I really hope that he didn't think for a moment that Lily would have even considered aborting him. Poor kid. Sev's got his work cut out for him, doesn't he?

    Snape's father was a real bastard wasn't he?

    Great job on the chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry needs to talk. About a lot of things. One of the reasons that abuse gets missed is that the children often don't have the language to describe their plight, "My uncle's going to give me a good hiding" meant just a few swats with a birch rod to Fudge, not beating the child within an inch of his life.

     

    When a teenager tells me, "My dad's going to kill me." I have to ask, "Do you mean he will be very upset and shout at you, or do you mean you are going to get a beating?"

    Fudge, (I am in no way defending him, BTW) didn't know what questions to ask.

     Harry is needing some putting back together, but I think Sev is starting to get a handle on how to deal with Harry, at last.

    Yup. Old Toby is based on my own father. 

     Thanks for the kind words. 

Title: Revelations 10 Mar 2012 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Kitsune-chan (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon!
Title: Revelations 10 Mar 2012 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally love your story.....but dude....you totally, potentially made your story a forum for this debate all on your own by posting these old "Laws" Ppl will not be able to help themselves......may I suggest just leaving the story lie as it were, an removing your AN? Some peeps may take it the wrong way (which is they're own doing I realize) but they will -- human nature and all that. (I personally find these laws offensive, and barbaric, and VERY little offends me. Others will find them offensive too) Your characters are allowed to have all the opinions they want irregardless of your own, so if Lupin decides to think abortion is "Barbaric" that is his truth. Hopefully ppl will realize on their own that this does NOT have to be their truth. Anyways, just saying.....u r playin' with fire by posting that AN. (which is fine, but it sounds like you don't want it). I couldn't even not post my little 2 cents as I have done above. What if someone reads this who has had an abortion? It is very emotional, and not as simple as people generalize it to be. I once wrote a very in depth paper on abortion. I spoke to many people, and got to have a fantastic look at BOTH sides of the debate. Someone who has had and abortion WILL take offence, and they will post, I promise you. You will get the debate you do not want. You are stirring up trouble. Anyways, very well written chapter, excellent character development, and advancement of plot.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your kind words. 

    These are real British laws.

    The Abortion Act of 1967 repealed most of the 1861 law, however wizards are stuck in the 19th Century.  I like to be accurate while staying in universe. I posted the A/N to be clear where I was drawing my information.

    Abortion is very emotional. As you say, Lupin's position Lupin's truth. I do not expect anyone to take it as their own. It is not my truth.

    There are many points in this story that are triggering, I try to warn people.

Title: Revelations 10 Mar 2012 9:34 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how your Remus is a little clueless. haha. I didn't think it was that disturbing...or well disturbing at all. Thankies for the update.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    I'm just a little cautious because people have been very upset over things in this story that are much less controversial that the abortion debate. 

Title: Walking in the Rain 05 Mar 2012 7:49 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, I had a laugh at the expression no doubt on Snape's face at Remus's 'suggestion' at the end there ^^ - I really like how you're handly Harry's emotions in this, theyre very deep and every new chapter sucks me back in ^^
    Looking forward to more :)
Title: Walking in the Rain 04 Mar 2012 4:50 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I love Harry, Snape and Remus in this chapter. All were excellently portrayed. But Snuffles? He rocks!
Title: Trusting 29 Feb 2012 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I had asumed that the dog was Sirius however Remus would recognise him and as he thinks Sirius is evil would he have brought him to Spinners End? I mut be on the wrong track silly me. Thanks for a great story
Title: Walking in the Rain 28 Feb 2012 10:57 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol I can just imagine how much Severus would love to be moved to the burrow with Molly fussing :)
Title: Walking in the Rain 28 Feb 2012 2:20 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    It looks like things will be rough for awhile there with Severus and Harry, the poor boys! Wonder how Severus will react when Snuffles is not Snuffles - at least I don't think he is really a "Snuffles" - trying to not say who I think it is. :)

    Really great chapter...can't wait to see what happens next, as I really hope the awkwardness of Lupin and Harry goes away. I feel bad for both of them too.

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

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