Aww that's really good! I love the last line especially!
| Title: Watching Harry
| 15 Dec 2011 5:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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awww severus
and lupin of all of them you would think would recognize padfoot
Ah loved that chapter, im so glad that the dog has been found, Harry needed a bit of a break, it did make me chuckle when Harry decided on a freshening charm typical 13 year old lol :)
| Title: Watching Harry
| 02 Dec 2011 12:09 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh wow 2 mauraders in Severus' home! Perhps Ron could visit and make it 3! Thank you for a wonderful chapter with sensitive issues handled so well
Wonderful chapter :) Poor Harry, I'm glad Severus could comfort him somewhat after all he's gone through. Lily would be proud of him.
Enter Remus, yay! My second favorite professor :). I wonder if he knows the dog is Sirius now? Hmmm....
Hope to read more soon!
I like that Sirius decided to show back up, and Harry's and Severus's conversation n.n I feel really bad for Harry... And I really like that Severus has continued not really expressing his feelings despite feeling them strongly since it's IC
Anyways, please update soon!
Amazingly well written chapter.(as much as I love Sev telling fairy tales last chapter--with voices!--this was even better!) Just fyi--you made me cry at 6:00 a.m. Impressive.
Looking forward to your next update and more info on how Remus will shift the dynamics of their relationships.
V.
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