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Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 1:09 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazingly well written chapter.(as much as I love Sev telling fairy tales last chapter--with voices!--this was even better!) Just fyi--you made me cry at 6:00 a.m. Impressive.

    Looking forward to your next update and more info on how Remus will shift the dynamics of their relationships.

    V.
Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 12:01 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Moony knows that the dog is reallu Padfoot...does he believe that Sirius is innocent then?
Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 6:35 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg , poor Harry. I hope that Severus can get through to him and that he never does anything like that again.

    I'm happy that Lupin found Snuffles. I hope that that helps Harry's spirits.

    Great chappie. Can't wait for the next one.
Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 6:00 am
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, another fantastic chapter! I love all the emotion from Snape. I like how he reacts to Remus, too. And the return of Snuffles, yay! This is easily one of my top favorite HP fics.
Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 5:42 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was certainly a moving chapter. I was touched by it, certainly. Please update again soon, I look forward to reading more, especially the later reactions and interaction between Harry and Snape.
Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 5:30 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    This could be bad... if Sirius does something....

    Great chapter!
Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 4:59 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    OH WOW! That was soooo sooo good! I absolutely LOVED this chapter!

    Odd as it sounds, I can see Hagrid being a good one to supervise-he's childlike in many ways and probably for most (not all!) students, easier to not be embarrassed by.

    Oh awesome, Lupin found the "dog!"
    hehe...and the dog is going to visit. Ha for everyone's sake Snuffles better stay in doggie form!

    I'm glad that you didn't do what a lot of authors seem to do-heal his physical injuries and *poof* no more issues! I like how you have him starting to heal physically but still being emotionally vulnerable.

    I sort of understand Severus in this chapter-about the suicide watch. Right after the VA Tech massacre, (I live in VA) a girl at my college who knew three people who died-one being her BEST friend-was put on suicide watch. It's a good thing too-because she attempted it. Sadly I also know someone who succeeded. ANYWAYS......

    Great chapter and I hope that you write more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

     

    Yeah, I love Hagrid.

     

    The suicide watch rules come right out of hospital manuals.  It really does only take a second.  Fortunately, suicidal impulses tend to be short lived, so 72 hour watches are common.

    I don't like to skip over the real physical consequences of things.

     

    Thanks for reading. 

Title: Watching Harry 01 Dec 2011 4:47 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! So... Sev IS Harry's real da? Right? Anywho... I really loved this chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Well, he was Harry's biological father.

     It appears he's waking up to being Harry's da. 

Title: The Storyteller 23 Nov 2011 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Kitsune-chan (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw... poor Harry :( Although I like the realistically caring Severus - it took something huge to shake him into it, so it's way more realistic than what most people do. :)

    Anyways, please update soon!
Title: The Storyteller 21 Nov 2011 3:30 pm
Reviewer: kazza (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely end to the chapter. It reminds me of the grandfather's comment in 'The Princess Bride' - as you wish.

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