That is sad! You shouldn't try to make your readers cry, that's not nice. I hope Snape goes medieval on Petunia's heinie. O:)
| Title: The Storyteller
| 16 Nov 2011 7:23 am
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| Reviewer: swetz (Signed)
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Bless you sweetheart.. this' a wonderful read.
So does Harry have anmesia? Looking forward to seeing more of both the boys povs. Is Severus heading towards being very confused?
That. Was almost unbearably sweet, and incredibly painful. This is one of my favorite chapters of yours for this story.
Seriously.
While there isn't really any action, it tugs on the emotions. Especially when you take into account the situation and previous incidents. I've never seen Snape to tender, but it works! Works because of what had happened, and how you don't actually use his name.
It's fantastic!
| Title: Mortal Peril
| 16 Nov 2011 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love Poppy and Severus together they are brillient thank you
| Title: The End of His Rope
| 16 Nov 2011 12:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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That ws a bit of a shock i thought we were past this!
thank goodness he's okay! i wonder how remus will deal with this?
Never thought I'd see the day when Severus would shed tears...well done though it made the chapter more emotional and touching. Glad you updated so soon,I was really looking forward to this chapter. I hope you will update soon again.
Never thought I'd see the day when Severus would shed tears...well done though it made the chapter more emotional and touching. Glad you updated so soon,I was really looking forward to this chapter. I hope you will update soon again.
Aww poor Harry finally broke,I love that Remus is going to come stay for a while to help Severus, I hope they get on in some fashion lol :)
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