"Probably, he did need to have one of Poppy's mindhealers look at Potter."
Uh... ya think? Now why wouldn't that immediately occur to any reasonable adult? Great chapter!
Wow! This chapter was really impressive! I could really see the conversation between Mrs. Cook, and Severus. I recall over-hearing little chats like that from my own kitchen when I was a child. :)
Very much a superb story so far. Keep going. The updates are coming along at a nice pace.
Oh wow. I freaking love this story!! ive spent the last few days reading it whenever I have had time and just love it! I cant wait to see an update, literally! big thumbs up so far :D
Breathtaking as always...
I'm surprised Harry isn't in a coma from shock. (That's my impression of that last line) Somehow child, I think there is a little more to it than just duty on Sev's part, no matter what he says.
Great chapter!
| Title: Comfort
| 29 Sep 2011 10:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh lovely I had a lump in my throat when hrry was crying on his own! Thank you so much
Brilliant, beautiful, absolutely can't wait to read more!
Really wonderful story! I've really enjoyed it. I love Snape, he's perfectly written and you've developed his character so well!
Very good chapter. Not that they ALL aren’t! lol. I've enjoyed them all :).
I really liked this scene between Harry and Snape. You wrote the professor's actions in a concerning manor without going over the top and making Snape seem out of character. His actions sounded just right :). I also liked Harry's contemplating of the professor.
Until next time!
I liked this chapter, and how you showed Harry crying without seeming out of character.
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