wow that was a powerful chapter it truly showed how much Snape cares.
Poor Harry. He's so confused right now. Snape too, probably.
Sometimes it's the little things that are wonderful in making this story come to life. The last part where Harry found Snape apologizing so embarrassing that he couldn't bear to hear Snape apologize was very well done. It is so telling about Harry, and Snape as well that he is not sure how to handle Harry not allowing him to apologize.
Aw, poor Harry.
I hope that Snape keeps him. Even going to the Weasleys would unbalance Harry. He needs stability and undivided attention. They have so many children.
He's Snape's son though, and Snape should not let him go.
I wonder when Harry will find out.
I am so glad that Harry and Severus are growing more comfortable with each other and Harry is trusting Snape more.
Great chapter. I can't wait for more.
Oh, this was a good chapter. Just fluffy enough to be touching, but not moving so fast as to be unrealistic or OoC. Eager for more.
This chapter stirred up all kinds of emotions. I felt bad for Harry, being undone by a comforting touch. Felt angry at Snape for not being more loving towards Harry instead of so duty-bound, but that's probably the only thing Harry could understand and accept right now anyway. I'm assuming Snape is starting to care for Harry as a person, but he probably doesn't even realize that yet, much less being able or willing to show it. What was he going to apologize for? His treatment of Harry? But they are still at cross-purposes, right? Harry thought he was going to apologize for the whole childhood with the Dursleys, etc.
Anyway, awesome, angsty story.
I've got such a lump in my throat from reading about Harry's breakdown. Just absolutely beautiful. Can't wait for more.
Poor Harry. And Snape is just awesome! :D
I'm afraid I'm too tired to write much of a review now...I'll try to do better tomorrow...but I did just want to say that I really love this story and that was a fantastic chapter!
i loved snape in this one! please keep up the good wrk! hope to hear from u soon
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