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Title: His Grandfather's Eyes 16 Sep 2011 12:37 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor, poor Harry! I feel so bad for him!
Title: His Grandfather's Eyes 15 Sep 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Evil Genus (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent come back chapter, though wow is Severus going to be hitting himself when he realizes there is no house elf...
Title: His Grandfather's Eyes 15 Sep 2011 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry he has had a rough time and Severus is blind to him. Thank you for gret chapter and I hope you re well now.
Title: His Grandfather's Eyes 15 Sep 2011 10:38 pm
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. So Snape thinks it's a house elf doing all of the work. What the heck does he think Harry is doing all day? I guess he isn't thinking -- not clearly anyway. I hope he is rather ashamed of himself when he realizes the truth.

    Great story.
Title: His Grandfather's Eyes 15 Sep 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey great chapter as usual. I do have to wonder if Severus is a)still influenced from that spell and not realizing what he is saying b)joking in a way Harry doesn't understand c)living his nightmares as such from Lily or d)it's not Severus at all but rather some evil person.

    Ha. I understand about Irene. "She" did a lot of damage where I live in VA. Also the fact that in the same week, just days before she hit we had a earthquake in a town next to mine, and a huge storm that did its own damage.

    I need to get back writing my own story, "Of Scarlet and Emerald" but I waiting on some info from my step-mom who is a pediatric PT and OT. I've researched it on the internet but lol don't understand it. Well, my birthday is Monday and I took off some time for it so maybe I can work on it then. ANYWAYS, great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I was in Ashburn VA for the earthquake.  Decided to come home from vacation early, because I didn't like the look of Irene's storm track.  Good thing too, wouldn't have made it home until last week, there were so many roads out in Upstate NY and VT.

     

    I like writing realistic medical stuff...I'd be happy to help you interpret stuff, if you like. 

Title: His Grandfather's Eyes 15 Sep 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Macbyrne (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome update; I love that Severus thinks he has a house-elf, when it's really just Harry! Can't wait for more!
Title: House Elf and Late Night Tea 23 Aug 2011 2:02 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    NICE! Too short of a chapter though...but very good!
Title: House Elf and Late Night Tea 13 Aug 2011 6:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I do like late night chats you can get to the hert of the problem and this was a very good chat thank you
Title: House Elf and Late Night Tea 13 Aug 2011 9:34 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very good story and I hope to read more soon! I also wish you well, I’ve had relative who dealt with kidney stones and know it’s an unpleasant experience.

    I really like how this plot has originality and that you keep everyone, namely Severus, in character. He's not all hugs and smiles, lol. I of coarse, feel awful for Ginny, Harry and Neville. Abuse and the death of a friend are obviously very hard things to take.

    I’ll be checking my alerts for updates :)
Title: House Elf and Late Night Tea 13 Aug 2011 1:25 am
Reviewer: anathi (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad you're feeling better.

    Ah, I wasn't expecting the house-elf twist. Should be interesting when Severus' figures it out!

    I love how you show their feelings without spelling it out here:
    " 'You were friends?' Potter asked.
    Severus clenched the hand that wasn't holding his teacup.
    The child dropped his eyes and cringed a little as though he expected to be cuffed. "

    I wonder how Harry will come to learn of Severus' true feelings.

    Looking forward to your next update!

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