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Title: Panic 27 Jun 2011 12:02 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful revenge on them best I've ever read well done
Title: Panic 26 Jun 2011 6:09 am
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, it's getting so much better, update update soon!
Title: Panic 26 Jun 2011 3:07 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ahhhh. i love the smell of revenge in the evening!

    mwahahahahahahaha!
Title: Panic 26 Jun 2011 2:49 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    NIIICE!! It would be quite a twist though if the next day Severus reads the Daily Prophet and finds out the Dursleys -all three have been killed, and has to tell Harry. MORE DRAMA AND ANGST-with a nice heavy dash of Harry and Hermione Harmony moments please!! Also more SNAPE!!
Title: Panic 26 Jun 2011 12:57 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was wonderful! Snape at his best!
Title: Reassurance 26 Jun 2011 12:15 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I really like the Oculist, Madame Vitrea. She seems brisk but kind, and she seems like she's good at her job. I loved how Severus noted Harry's embarrassment about his old pair and tried to cover for him and how he insisted that Harry get some nice glasses, and not just cheap ones. I can see them making progress, step by step.

    Speaking of progress, I'm so glad that Severus realized that Harry was afraid of being hit, that he had misinterpreted Severus' words, and they got that straightened out.

    And that last sentence, where Severus acknowledges that he failed Neville, and how it mirrors his treatment of Harry, is so sad. Great writing!
Title: Panic 25 Jun 2011 7:57 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Abandon Dudley? I can't imagine the Dursleys doing that. And why would Snape suggest it?

    Otherwise, a great chapter!

    Author's Response: It's a dilemma...If the best way to protect your child would be to get as far away from them as possible, would you do it?  Would that be harder than throwing yourself in front of a killing curse?  Perhaps Snape's just being evil...
Title: Panic 25 Jun 2011 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry, thinking that he was being sent back to the Dursleys.

    Please tell me that Snape is not taking Dudley? Or is it the Grangers? Or are the Grangers just taking the boy somewhere?

    Anyway, I loved that scene with Snape and the Dursleys!! Great job! I wanted to cheer!

    Author's Response:

    Poppy and Snape are worried that with the wards gone that Dudley's a target.  Petunia and Vernon can rot, but they feel bad about Dudley. Poppy's made a Muggle child protection case file for Harry, showing that he's been taken into care because of reports by his school--a Scottish School for the Gifted.

    Poppy has been looking for someone with contacts to take the file to London.  Dr. Granger has a friend who's a social worker in child protective services.  She's taking Harry's file (which is quite enough to get Dudley taken into care, all by itself) to her friend and saying,  "I shouldn't be doing this, but I don't want to wait until those people in the Scotland office get off their asses and actually call you about the cousin."  The story being that Scottish Child protection is handling Harry's case.  

    The Somebody Else's Problem Charm makes it so they can use the information from Harry's file for Dudley, but since Harry's not their case, they won't actually look for Harry (if they even take note of the boy's name it would be a surprise).  Eventually, the file will get passed around and make it's way to the Muggle liason office addressed to Arthur Weasley.  Somebody Else's Problem charms work equally well on all government workers, Wizard or Muggle.

    Foster care is a decent protection for Dudley because Pureblood wizards (and those masquerading as such), won't understand the government putting children with seemingly random strangers.  Even Voldemort will be looking for old fashioned orphanages.

Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade 25 Jun 2011 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's scary that Harry's thoughts seem to be verging on suicidal. The dementors made it worse at the end of the chapter, but Harry was already sort of leaning that way on the Astronomy Tower, it seemed. At the least, he seems to be in a serious depression. I hope Severus will notice it soon.

    And I do wonder about Ginny, as she was obviously not on the Tower to study.

    It's too bad that Harry can't realize that Severus is trying to help him, but they have had a hostile past and Harry's not inclined to trust adults anyway. I just hope Severus will really take note of things before something happens.

    Great chapter!
Title: Fear 25 Jun 2011 5:55 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. It's sad to see how Harry inteprets all of Severus' words and actions, but not surprising. I do hope something will happpen to reassure him soon. It's hard to see him shutting down like this, poor kid.

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