This story is a very intriguing read. I like the reference to Hitchhiker's in this chapter. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Hee! It's got a Somebody Else's Problem Field!
| Title: My Child
| 22 Jun 2011 9:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved seeing umbledore get his comeupance serves him right thank you
| Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives
| 19 Jun 2011 7:10 pm
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| Reviewer: mworth1019 (Anonymous)
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what a great story.. very poignant. nice job.....
I loved the manipulation of Fudge and Severus' standing up to Dumbledore at the end. Fantastic story!
| Title: My Child
| 19 Jun 2011 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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I am soooo happy that Severus took that stance!! I know that Dumbledore is in an unenviable position, being essentially the leading general in a war, and ultimately responsible for the outcomes - but I also believe he makes the mistakes of not having close enough advisors, and not keeping others fully informed so as to be able to fully consider any plans. More people fully informed may well have prevented untold pain on many, including Dumbledore himself.
Great chapter, really enjoyed and I loved how Snape more or less tells Dumbledore to bugger off :) Well done and cant wait for the next.
| Title: My Child
| 18 Jun 2011 11:14 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Good for you Sev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes finally doumble dork is told off twice in a row! I love molly too. more please
| Title: My Child
| 18 Jun 2011 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: Spring Fever (Anonymous)
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Great job! I wonder if due to Ginny's suicide attempt (though it's being coded as accidental) will influence Harry to try or not to try suicide himself.
| Title: My Child
| 17 Jun 2011 10:55 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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This is such an awesome story. Love it.
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