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Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011 11:06 am
Reviewer: daydreams (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful story please keep on going. looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011 10:54 am
Reviewer: Magada Bridger (Anonymous) [Report This]
    FYI: the 2% factoid about CPR is more depressing than the reality. It includes every instance where CPR is used (like nursing homes). So many people die because their already toast. In children CPR is extremely effective, because they aren't suffering from some sort of major mechanical defect. That's also why it's so important to life guards (drowning isn't a mechanical defect).

    Author's Response:

    Oh, you're absolutely right.  If one looks at CPR  statistics on patients like Ginny: young, otherwise healthy whose hearts stopped due to causes like overdoses on CNS depressants, thats about 25%.  If you only count cold water drowning, that's 33%.  Warm water drowning is 20%. Etc.  One can't pick the kinds of cardiac arrests one is going to witness, hence my 2% quote of counting everyone--old guys go to the pool too and my mom dropped dead on her shift at work.

     Actually, 2% is a pretty darn big number, if you stop to think about it.  It's much better odds than winning the lottery.  If everone knew CPR, then there would be a much greater likleyhood that every arrest would be witnessed.  CPR is much more effective when it is started within ten minutes off the person's collapse, so EVERYONE, should go and get themselves certified 

     

Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011 5:58 am
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh well, obviously this was a transition chapter...hope for more action next!
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011 4:37 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow powerful chapter show the emotions of many and Molly rant was justified.

    keep up the amazing work with thsi story
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011 2:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Molly! LOL! Love how she gave Dumbles hell! Good for her.

    Loving this story still. I just hope that Ginny will be unparalysed soon. Poor girl.

    Can't wait till the next chappie.
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011 1:42 am
Reviewer: anathi (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for another quick update! You do a great job with delicate topics in your story. At first I was surprised by Ginny's actions, but the explanation about Neville was very believable. And it's great that you haven't forgotten about Neville; he's real and more than just a plot point, even while he's dead.

    It's interesting to see the different reactions to Tribuo Vita. Look forward to learning more about it!

    I love this line:
    Mr. Weasly looked thunderstruck, "I love Muggles." he whispered, fervently.
    I didn't think he could become any more enthralled with Muggles!

    Mrs. Weasley's anger was justified, and I've always wondered how Albus can seem so carefree about the children being in contact with the Horcruxes - like sending Harry to hunt them down! - but I do hope Albus doesn't become the bad guy in this story.

    What a cliffhanger! Can't wait to find out who sent the Patronus (I'm assuming that's what the flash of light was) and why.

    Keep up the great work!
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 11 Jun 2011 8:35 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter

    note to self: never ever piss off Molly Weasley!
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 11 Jun 2011 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Molly went off on Dumbledore. He deserved it. Why was she mad at Arthur, though? Wouldn't Arthur have recognized Dr. Granger? He did speak with both of Hermione's parents during the trip to Diagon Alley during Harry's second year. I wonder what Dumbledore rushed off to do. Can't wait to see what happens next, specifically with Harry and Severus.

    Author's Response: Oh dear...Did he...?  he is very tired...We'll say it's a slightly AU thing until I talk to my continuity fairy. :-)
Title: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 11 Jun 2011 5:32 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Molly! Excellent job on her, and on Arthur and Harry as well. You're really keeping the interest level up.
Title: Seeking Peace 11 Jun 2011 5:24 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying reading this . It's great that you're not sugar coating the events, and Snape's different behaviour from his normal impassive facade was a clever way to show how he was being affected by the spell as well as what happened.

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