Love it! Oh this is just a fantastic story! Great progression of the story line, the background information, the new thoughts and feelings. This story feels very organic, very natural like it fits. Good job being true to the Harry Potter world, well as much as we can be in fanfiction. :) I did notice some little typos though. You may want to go back later when the story is done and fix them. Some punctuation as well with dialogue (mostly the use of commas). Thank you for the update, and please update again when you can!
Wow. Fantastic chapter and fantastic story. What drama and emotions. I love reading from Snape's perspective. The oculist was very interesting, and the magic about her, the sign and window and all that was very creative, yet it seemed to fit in the Wizarding world very well. Well done!
| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 27 Apr 2011 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Love it! Fabulous emotions and descriptions.
| Title: Lunch with Snape
| 27 Apr 2011 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: happy (Anonymous)
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It will be interesting to see, if the fic follows through to the end, when Harry sees his parents in the afterlife and James knowing Lily whored around with Snape and lied to him about Harry being his son.
I'm enjoying this story so much. But I wonder how well Harry will take the news when it eventually comes out that Snape is his father. Snape for the moment seems to be treating his relationship as if he was just a donor. I like a slow build in a story, so I appreciate that a lot.
| Title: Lunch with Snape
| 26 Apr 2011 8:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter you handled the very upsetting issues with sensitivity whilst keeping both Harry & Severus with in the paramaters of their charcters thank you
| Title: Lunch with Snape
| 26 Apr 2011 7:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Comptine (Anonymous)
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I am digging this story. My gosh, those Dursley's are completely vile aren't they? What would that do to someone to be so mistreated and despised, to then find out they are kept around not out of charity or a sense of duty but solely for the money? Poor, poor kid!
| Title: Reassurance
| 26 Apr 2011 7:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting ideas about the glasses thank you
| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 26 Apr 2011 7:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I wonder how canon Severus would have felt if he had known this? Good chapter thank you
| Title: Halloween, 1979
| 26 Apr 2011 7:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a powerful chapter thank you
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