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Reviews For No Sacrifice, No Victory
Okay, I have to say James is an idiot. An utter idoit...so stupid its almost cute. Almost. As for Lily, she a...well...a...Lily. :D I feel so bad for Snape, he can't help but defend Lily even after all these years and everything she did to him. And that last paragraph is awesome Lan!! *cries and hold's Snape despite his protest* Great chapter!! Author's Response: If you're planning the sequel, then you're likely writing on your own for awhile. :D Thanks, DA.
=)) =))I love that line!! Absolutely wonderful! Oddly enough I don't hate Petunia as much as I probably should...I mean she totally deserved that smack and I wish I could give her another one. But she does have a point...granted its a opinion based on ignorance...but...yeah, okay, I tried...I can't think up an excuse for her...Oh well, I guess you can't redeem everyone. :D Anyway, excellent chapter, as always! I adore Harry's clinginess even if it is born of fevor. Amazing Lan!! Author's Response: Nice excuse for Petunia, but it's not going to work. :D Thanks.
I love this story Lan. Lily as the bit...er...bad person towards Severus was James was sympathetic was lovely and a nice twist. Subtly add Aurora here and there was an excellent touch. And Snape's pride of Harry throughout the chapter was excellent! I love how Snape gets offended at being called meddlesome!! =)) Excellent chapter Lan!! Author's Response: I know right about Snape being meddlesome. lol. Thanks, DA. Glad you liked the first chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Autumn. Glad you enjoyed it. :D
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Author's Response: Wouldn't we all? :D Thanks.
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Author's Response: I usually make Sirius less canon Sirius. Canon Sirius bugged me like none other for some reason. Thanks for the review. :D |
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