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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Author's Response: Your sentence appeared inomplete. You like how I'm "having Harry"...what? I'm glad you like the story, and thanks for your review.
Hugs and Love, Vanime Author's Response: Thanks! :) Snape will be learning a few truths quite soon now, so not much longer to wait! And yes, Harry should get to the boathouse! Not only is Nagini there, but Voldemort too. Thanks for your review.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm pleased to hear that :). Thanks for your review.
(this is why you are not supposed to have a life! Lol) Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about the cliffy! :) I'm glad you liked the chapter, and yes indeed...I see your point, lol. I will post another chapter soon enough, once I finish going over it and allow people the time to actually read this one! Thanks for your review, Twi!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you think so :) Thank you for your review, however yes...truths will be revealed soon.
- missing an R and made me giggle. Instincts!!! What a naughty little kitty cat! *waggles finger* And so helpful to the plot. *grins* I rather liked the Snape looking through the door thing you added again. :) Author's Response: Ahh, how did I miss that? lol, I fixed the typo, thanks! And yes, that once innocent kitten is quite the trouble-maker now :P Very helpful to the plot though, yes indeed. Thanks for reviewing and sharing your thoughts, LCH! Glad you liked it!
However, I feel that inserting the final battle from DH is ... unnecessary? Snape in danger could have been done in a number of ways, without throwing people out of the loop. Author's Response: Thanks! :) And actually, I wanted to get the battle over with as I plan on having Harry attend his 7th year at Hogwarts. It was not at all about putting Snape in danger, that was a little unavoidable so I included it. Thank you for your review.
At this rate, the entire school will know about Toby before Snape does :P Anyways, please update soon! Author's Response: Well, Dumbledore is Dumbledore so likely there is a big unrevealed plan behind it all ;). Thanks for your review.
loved it so far - can't wait for more!!! |
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