It's so saddening that severus did nt want to acknowledge harry...seeing harry being cast aside after that just so angsty in a way...severus can try and learn to accept Toby but y nt harry?in fact harry must have been feeling so alone, severus took away Toby from him too...luckily he has Irma still thinking of him...
Mayb b this story will be forever wip....years since last updated..TT_TT
Author's Response: Not forever a wip - I haven't abandoned it, and still work on it when I can find the time. It's editing and updating I don't have time for on a regular basis at the moment but am always hoping to change that. Thank you for the lovely review, and I agree it was a very sad moment. Though, if my memory of the chapter serves me correctly, Severus does not know for sure that Harry is his son or else has not yet come into any sort of terms with that truth. I have written ahead of this chapter, so I promise there will be updates in the future. I just don't know when exactly yet. Feedback is always apreciated though, so thank you for taking the time to let me know your thoughts! :-D
Just finished reading this story, and I love it so much. So unique, so interesting... Well it's been around for a bit so you might know that already. I saw on the shoutbox you're updating soon, and I can hardly wait!!!
| Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 13 Sep 2014 2:13 am
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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This is an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading, you brought me to tears especially at the end. . . I love Toby and Harry together. Poor Harry, how can they leave him like this a while Toby is with Snape :( Please update!
| Title: Many Things Come to an End
| 13 Aug 2014 2:45 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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It is a real pity it stops like this. If you wante dto you could have wrapped this story up here.You could also have started a sequel. At the beginning of this story you say it's far from over. So are you going to continue?
Well, maybe he knows and everyone else does too but he should brew that potion cause Snape isn't going to except it otherwise.
| Title: Draco's Redemption
| 13 Aug 2014 11:09 am
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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This is going to be awesome
| Title: December Snow - part 2
| 03 Aug 2014 10:49 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Wow, they have a really complicated family. But I'm really glad with the answers
| Title: The Spreading of Suspicion
| 03 Aug 2014 8:39 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I wonder why Harry hasn't asked snape any question yet and why Toby hasn't asked Harry yet
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