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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
more and more interesting. In light of the far that the nearer that Harry (and Toby) get to the potential truth of the matter, but at the same time the truth continually seems to be as far as way as ever! What will happen once Draco & Harry are finally able to meet as they arranged...what actions will they decide to take or strategies will they put into play for the war? Will Harry (and Toby) ever learn the "full truth" about there parentage temselves, by accident or will someone finally break/or reveal the truth to the two boys? Just why are so many adults so insistace in keeping this truth away from both Harry & Toby, can't they see the harm the that this hidden truth has already caused...when will it?
I do hope that you have been/will be able to rescue this story from your disabled computer, because I would dearly love to see it continued. I've enjoyed all of your fics, but this one just sucked me in and I just had to read it all in one go ever since I got home from church this morning. Please forgive me for not reviewing every chapter, but I just couldn't keep from clicking the "Next" chapter button to see what happened next. Absolutely wonderful storytelling. Well done! This story truly deserves a rating of 10. If they'd let me rate it higher than that, I most definitely would! Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Really made me smile. I have plans and records for this fic, so I do not think it is one that requires rescuing from the hardrive (not sure, but am confident I'll be able to keep this one up again). I intend to continue every fic I have as I never abandon a HP fic, but this one is higher on the list because it's more possible to continue. Plus I really love this fic, mostly because of Toby. I'm glad that you enjoy all of my fics and this one, and I loved your review. Your comments really made me smile, and further motivated to find the files I need to continue this fic. I'll work on it! Thanks again! :)
the changes in Harry's appearance are happening very slowly is why no one else seems to have noticed anything at all? Undoubtably its because the students and staff see Harry all the time that the slow changes aren't readily apparanent With the slow changes of Harry's general appearance showing traits of both of his "true" parents....are these changes also causing alteration/changes in his behaviour or mannerism? Its almost as if Harry's come from under a blood adoption or something which covered his physical parentage and possible any family magics from his "true father" and these were originally replaced with those of James Potter. I can hardly wait to find out just what Severus will be able to reveal to Harry about his mother Lily? Or what Sirius truly hinted at prior to his death, that caused such a ruckus between Severus, Remus and Tonks? Especially something which even Albus too-many-names Dumbledore seems unaware of? Does Albus plan to reveal to Harry that he's aware of little Toby's presence at Hogwarts?
There are a few typos (you consistently mix up 'then' and 'than,' I've noticed) but nothing overly distracting. Anyways, please update soon!
Kreacher finally liking Harry and fighting with Dobby for his attention was really cool. I found it extremely funny when Snape walked in on them, you could only imagaine the things going through Snape's mind when that happened. I loved Harry's apoligie and when Keracher popped up, Harry was just the perfect definition of busted. Although I am Happy that they managed to destroy another horcrux. I hope for another letter soon and hopefully Snape will slowly start to peice the peices together on who SJE is. They are also many other wonderful things that I do not have the time to mention. Looking forward to reading the next exceptional chapter, BYE!!!
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