Good start - very interesting. Though I believe Harry has bitten off a little more than he'll be able to chew. Nevertheless, I am interested in where you will take us on this journey...
lol Curiosity too much for Severus...?
misundersnape...
| Title: Resolutions and a Misadventure
| 26 May 2011 4:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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This story is so addictive!!!!
This chapter is wonderful, I was so anxious when i was reading about Snape and Toby on the tower that i couldn't make myself stay still, I started tapping my foot so compulsively that i woke my sleeping grandma... By the way, i drew a picture about chapter 14, it's not a Botticelli (in fact i drew it to have a break from my Latin homework, which lasted 6 hours!!!!) but I'd like to show you, how can I do?
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Elena
P.S. Forgive my poor speech for I'm just an Italian student. Yes, italiano.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm pleased to hear that, actually. Really? I like your comments and they're very mood-boosting for me. Oh wow, you did? I'd love to see it! I'll send you a message on msn about it soon, instead of posting it here; might be easier. Thank-you for your review!!
| Title: Resolutions and a Misadventure
| 26 May 2011 4:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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That was a really great chapter....very exciting!
Jus wondering if I missed something though...dumbledore said Snape assumed a title toward Harry? What was it? Or is that yet to be revealed? Was just worried Id missed something.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy to hear it! Dumbledore was making comment on the fact that Severus had called Harry by his given FIRST name, therefore the title would be "Harry" but call such because it would mean something more then a simple name for Severus, as though he was labeling Harry as a seperate person to James Potter. Hope that clears it up, you didn't miss anything. :)
| Title: Reconciliations
| 24 May 2011 12:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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Superb!!
I loved at the beginnning how Snape saw one of Slughorns memory and now finally believes Harry's talent. Another fave moment from them was when Ron asked for the 'Princes' book.
I am extremely curious to who sent the poison and it is very lucky that Harry is now a potions expert.
I found it funny that Poppy didn't belive him at the end when he said he had no ides where Harry had gone. I also feel sorry for him because he would be so stresed knowing that they both took the unbreakable vow and Snaoe doesn't know what they said.
That's al for now and I can't wait for more Harry/Draco meetings and am curious to what the 'big moment' is..
BYE!!!
| Title: The Agreement
| 24 May 2011 12:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter haeaps more than the last. The unbreakable vow was really cool and I sort of couldn't belive that they would actually do it! I cannot wait to see what Snape does about it and if he approaches them about it. Finally we know some more about Mildred Merrigold which is like FINALLY! lol. It is really funny when Irma is talking to Snape after the Gryffs were in trouble, Fu-nny AS!
BYE!!!
| Title: Possibilities
| 24 May 2011 11:49 am
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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Good chappie, i hope that the golden trio don't get to far apart and become fiends again soon. I wonder when Draco and Harry's gareement will become an actual proper agreement. This wasn't a faveourite chapter but nonetheless still good. I liked the meeting with Tonks as well and it was very good.
I also can't wait to see if Sev replies to the letter, I can't wait to see where it comes from.
BYE!!!
| Title: The Simplicity of Lies
| 24 May 2011 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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Wonderful! i fell sorry for Harry to have his nightmares back. I liked when Harry was explaining to Snape about lies and stuff, if Harry hadn't been so busy ranting and raving and actually looking the expression on Snaoe's face I belive that it would have been funny. I am curious why Drac wants to go into the chamber and also if he does go in, how he is going to get out... bring a broom maybe?
Sorry to say I have no ideas on how the death Eaters will get in, but I can say, however, that this was a stunning chapter!
BYE!!!
P.S I am running out of fancy words meaning things like great :D
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 24 May 2011 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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AWWW!!!! There is no words for how wonderful this chapter was. Harry finding heaps about Lily by SNAPE was awesome and I think i have two fave lines: The silence that filled the office reminded Severus of a time in fourth year when he thought his cauldron had been about to catch fire. LOL random much?? And also:Severus frowned as he remembered something and decided to voice it in order to be rid of such memories. ‘How is it that your came across the knowledge that I am descended from a long line of Slytherins? I do not recall mentioning-’ He glanced up to glare at the boy just in time to catch Harry darting from the office.I loved that! No wonder Snape had to sit there contemplating things for ages.. And how on earth did Harry find out when Snapey's B'day was? Irma perhaps? Anyway it was so awesomly awesome and I can't wait to read more.
BYE!!
| Title: Reconciliations
| 23 May 2011 4:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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Dear watercrystals,
your story is fantastic!!!! I've been reading your fic for a while but I've just registered and i did it for you and for this wonderful fic. Please don't stop writing it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best wishes from Italy
Elena
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy to har that you think so. And welcome to the site, you really joined for me and this fic, wow, thanks! Oh believe me, I won't stop writing it, as long as I have reviewers and readers who still care for it. Italiano? wicked. Thanks for your review, Elena. -Mel
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 23 May 2011 12:34 am
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Wonderful. I really prefer the parchment rolls as it makes it so much easier and quicker. The owls were ood but took way to long. I loved the Irma gave them both a present and how we are now seeing a nice friendly side of her. Christmas lunch was awesome and extremely funny when Harry tried to converse with Snape. Poor Snapikins, the one time he goes to Christmas lunch.. he really does not have much luck.
I like that Severus is (very slowly) starting to see Harry just a tiny bit differntly. I also love the letter exchanges that have been going on. I wonder how long it has been since Snape wished anyone a Happy Christmas! I also would have liked to have seen Snpae's face when he reads Harry's reply aying that they disagree with what Snape said. Absolutely adored the chappie, WELL DONE!
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